Final Rating: 4.12. Finished 63 out of 134 entries.

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Animator: Patsawat Jongchansittho

Description: bored man meet friend.

Experience: 10 month

Time taken: 7 days

Comments:

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Simon Vergereau:

Try to find other gesture than "the point", it's a cliché gesture, I would add a breakdown frame 108, everything move at the same time. I'm sure you can find other intersting way to tell the story.

Janelle Klenzing:

Lip synch does not seem to quite match up, especially around frame 136 onwards. His mouth is open from his reaction to the other person speaking, but it seems it stays open as he goes into saying "no" - it should close a little more for "n" sound.

Dalton Krajewski:

A lot of the poses were great! I think adjusting the timing to fit with the audio a little more closely would benefit this animation the most.

Laurent Châtellier:

it's not finished