He thought wrong
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Daniel Huertas:
subtle at some parts, snappy at some parts.. you need to find the balance of your acting and find better poses for your key words or moments on the shot... the beginning looked floaty for me.. the end is nice but it doesn't match the rest of the action...
myung lee:
try making a setting and some context for this character. then it might help you to make better acting choices
Chris de Souza:
Nice poses, and the camera move was well done! This model has really big hands though so you really need to loosen them up at the wrists!
Matt Johnson:
Really nice!
Watch the exagerated poses. Has good silhouette, but if they seem to unrealistic for you to do, will probably seem over-the-top for him. "This girl" one was a little extreme. Facial animation and thought behind his actions was really good.
Eric Huang:
Good stuff :)
Matt Garward:
Good work. I (personally) don't like the sudden camera move to the left and back, made just so we can see his arms. I think it would have been just as effective without his hands off-screen, or a different pose. As it stands, that move draws attention to itself, and a camera move shouldn't distract from the action. :)
kienwei80:
I like your animation. But I prefer you make your camera to almost full shot instead of u need to pan your camera in the middle.
Alonso Soriano:
camera move is distracting, and the huge pose change for Girl I do'n't buy because it doesn't seem like he's referencing a specific girl in the room, so he doesn't need such a huge change. Seems like he changes where the listener is at that gesture as well.
Lots of beautiful subtle stuff. Good face stuff.
Gregory Naud:
Good job. Maybe it would have been nice to add more contrast in the pose in general, cause i see just 2 "general" body poses. Also the camera move feels a bit weird as we don't see any background. Other than that good use of breakdowns and good overall acting
Jeranimo:
who is he talking to??
Ritwik Nag:
Great job!! felt the hold on key poses a bit too much giving it a blocking feeling...luv the breakdown of the dialogue!!
Noshin:
gud
Dan Dulberger:
Arms stay very still when posed raised in mid air. This looks odd. It's very hard to keep arms still that way, especially if they got there from a fast movement. Have them sway slowly and/or drift abit (previous movement direction+down perhaps).
Steve Clarke:
I like the gestures but towards the end he becomes quite stiff in the transitions. I think if they were more fluid and natural this could be great.
Srikanth:
Camera movement around frame 179 was not needed and also in the 230.. otherwise u hit some nice pose..very good work..
Aaron Clement:
Good dejected pose at the beginning. Things move at the same time and theres a bit of twinning in there. Try breaking things up more. Felt sincere at the end of the day and because your the last entry I'm watching, I'm gonna give you an extra star.
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
Not bad acting, the movements are too sudden. I'd rule out the camera move, it breaks the flow. The lipsync need more work.
Mike Courtney:
animation is jerky overall









Animator: Tan Jui Horng
Description: Trying to interpret the clip as man cornered and forced to explain himself. Probably should have toned the big turning at the middle way down, but, oh well.
Experience: 1 year?
Time taken: Too long :(