Best Intentions
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Mark Bogdanoff:
Decent animation, but I feel like the rendering gets in the way.
Daryl Marples:
Good lip synch - the face is a bit rigid as are the hands,
I found the aged film filter distracting and hard to see the animation through.
Ozgur Yildirim:
I like this! Very stylish, and I love the way he smokes, too :) Cool.
Daniel Huertas:
it's a shame that the dust and scratches didn't let me see enough animation
Joseph K. Garrahan:
cool stuff!
Rafi Ben Aharon:
nice, he looks and acts cool. convincing as a reality show dude :)
Chris Niewinski:
Very nice animation. I do like the old film effect, reminds me of the Incredibles intro. But not alot of contrast between the character and bkg, kinda hard to see.
David Bokser:
Fun and subtle gag. It would be cool to have the character hold on the "girl" pose for 5 or 6 more frames.
Gregory Marlow:
NICE. I like that he looks at his hand to see if there is a booger. Film grain effect gets a bit distracting through.
Christopher Benhase:
I really like the feel of it.
Jeremy Schichtel:
like the part where he wipes his nose with his hand and then checks his hand, film effect is as little distracting
Daniel Shorten:
That's a unique gesture where he holds his nose.
The facial expression and eye movement in the space after he's sniffed is really good.
Aaron Clement:
Not too bad... I was waiting for the punch line... like he was going to light the ciggarette and would be blown up or something. Nice animation overall, though... good acting, too!
Pete Y:
nice poses
was the grainy effect really necessary?
John Erickson:
Great job. Wonderful poses. I love the way he looks at his hand after he wipes his nose. I dont know about the part at 'Help him in some way' The part where he puts his hand up to the bridge of his nose. Its a good pose but it doesnt seem to fit at that part of the dialogue. That part where he wipes his nose and looks at his hand is great. very suttle and smooth. Great job!
Eric Huang:
Nice, although i feel like the film grain is distracting.
Josh Doohen:
nice work with the subtle details!!
Ryan Daniel:
It's really nice animation, but the film grain effects are hiding all your hard work and really serve the piece a disservice.
Tony Rivera:
way to put the empisis on some words with the hand gestures..
Lauren Andersson:
great acting
Tom Cho:
Very nice!
samy.oddjob@gmail.com:
focus on animation not rendering
Patrick Chin:
I like the acting. Some of the gestures are very nice. I especially like it when he moves the cigarette towards his mouth but holding off for a moment before putting it in. The whole old film feel does make it hard to read though. Overall very cool!
Nate Dorn:
great job.. maybe things seem a little delayed?
selvaraj:
good animation
Danny Garnett:
the old film effect is a little too distracting, make it more suddle if you want it, otherwise drop it.
Manu Järvinen:
Hahhaha, awesome. The 315-325 "what came out of my nose" bit was a really great touch :D
Ciaran:
Cool. The grain is way overdone :D but it's a good idea, pretty well presented. I like the acting too, nice use of the cigarette as something to work from. Good work.
Wolfram Kampffmeyer:
most of the gestures doesn't fit to the text. Or they are too late
John Cruz:
One of the best, maybe the best
Giovanni:
I love this "documentary" setting! And the animation is a good one.
Robert Tighe:
Love the cigarrette. Lose the effects next time ok? Overall nice work .
Nanda van Dijk:
i like your animation, i just don't like the part that his hand covers his entire face. this pose would be better if his fase would turn a bit so you can stil see his expression and his lipsinq.
Jorge Rodiles:
Great!









Animator: Don Dixon
Description: Animated acting clip.
Experience: 5 years
Time taken: 28 days