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Final Rating: 5.72. Finished: 19 out of 131 entries.
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Animator: Éder Cardoso

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Experience: Not much.

Time taken: Long enough.

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HariNarayan:

wow !!
thats kool
:)

Daniel Huertas:

very nice acting.. i would have moved the character around to make it more challenging and dynamic.. nice job!

Siva Kumar:

Hand movement looks monotonous....lip synch is good.

Jen:

The sniff is really great, I love the way his face moves with emotion, your 'M's could use a little more umph, but the hang gestures are spot on.

Matt Johnson:

Really try an exagerate the poses and then pull back. Subtle poses are good, but it feels weak there. I liked the facial expressions and body attitude. Remember to overlap/ease and poses in the hands and fingers too.

Taber Dunipace:

A nice animation but very bland and emotionless. One of the principals is Exaggeration, and that's not just for use in cartoony scenes!

Eric Huang:

I like your facial expressions, but I think your poses could be more dynamic... right now they are all very similar.

Aaron Jonas:

nice work.. A little on the snappy side. watch you ease in and ease outs

Pete Y:

snappy and kind of cool

maybe a little too snappy

John Erickson:

nice timing and movement.

Aaron Clement:

Too jerky. You did the juggle action twice... which is overkill and doesn't add a lot to the performance... It's good that you kept him in pose... just poor acting choices.

Ann-Marie Denham:

Lipsync needs to be tweaked in a couple of places.

diganta:

its good

W Jacob Gardner:

too much hand gesticulation

kienwei80:

Not bad.

Tomas Ortiz:

Good job. I liked how you used your arms.

david arthur:

the mechanics and level of polish on this are great, my only crits would be the lips at the end dont quite match the voice, and perhaps more variation in the gestures would have been nice. a really great piece though :)

Gregory Naud:

Good acting. Maybe we have the impression that the feet are stuck on the floor. Little more work needed on the lipsync.

Seth Taylor:

Sharp. Cery nice movement and acting

Emmanuel:

Nice gestures and acting!

Yogesh Kaushal:

I guess theres some repetition in the palm actions in the beginning .. the body could have moved as per the intensity of the dialogue.., But the expressions were really decent. Good job

Nate Dorn:

look out for repeating actions

Ciaran:

Good. The hands are great for most of it but the quick hand gesture at the end for "change for me" seems too flippant or just hastily done.

Dan Dulberger:

More (sporadic) eye contact with whomever he's talking to would've made this clip even better.

Mike Courtney:

bit jerky overall

Paulo Clayton:

Lots of really good expression. Work on convincing lip sync and you're there!