Daryl Marples:

Cool.

Brad Regier:

i like his wild gestures. Maybe break up the timing a little.

Haakon Gaarder:

Very good! It fits the intensity of the voice very well!

HariNarayan:

gud 1 !!

Jesse Baumgartner:

Nice. Lots of emotion in his delivery.

Jack Daniels:

Too many poses... which makes it Shatner-esque... which makes it campy.

Joseph K. Garrahan:

good. but a bit exagerated.

Matt Kenley:

a tad over acted, good stuff though.

Ryan Hagen:

Good job. To me he feels a bit excited in every action he's doing. Holding some of the poses a bit longer would've helped I think. Great job though. Keep rockin'.

Tyler Phillips:

I think that there is a lot of good animation here, though I think that there is a lot going on squeezed into the limit of timing. Like when he says "some way" he does two poses instead of one. I think it would look better if there was one there.

Alonso Soriano:

really great animation skills, there's just a little too much going on. Take out a few of those ideas and this would be a all gold

Gregory Marlow:

VERY NICE

Aaron Clement:

Too much movement... it was distracting for me... the lip sync look good.

Marcos Borba Moreira:

loved the lip sync

james:

love the "that, if, I could" bit! maybe a few too many poses overall though?????

Ryan Magill:

Very nice poses/movement

Eric Huang:

nice! very nice smooth motion... no crits :)

Ann-Marie Denham:

There's a lot of movement here, but it works well because you hit and hold the poses so that they register to the eye clearly. Very good use of the torso.

Josh Doohen:

pretty amazing. a little too fast with the movements towards the end perhaps...but consistent.

diganta:

its really cool

kienwei80:

Good job!

Pete Y:

not the best acted piece but
very nice and very well polished

Its a pleasure to look at :)

W Jacob Gardner:

loosen up those hits on the poses. they are all overly snappy.

Jamie:

Nice motion, far too many poses though, looks like your trying to hit everything, perhaps change momentum too, all of the gestures appear to be at the same frantic pace, nice work though, some loveley poses.

david arthur:

good effort, a bit too busy for my taste, like he's had too much coffee:)

samy.oddjob@gmail.com:

nice poses but your animation is really too much pose to pose !!! try to smooth all this and you don't need to make you character change the pose on each word. by the way ncie rendering, even if it's a animation contest :p

Tom Cho:

Really good but it seems all the poses are large. Perhaps make more variety with the degree of accents.

John Erickson:

great poses and timing. very dynamic.

Tomas Ortiz:

Love the exsageration, and overall expresions on the characters face.

Gregory Naud:

Great acting and animation. Maybe tempering some movements could help adding even more contrast

Kristoffer Clark:

the poses are great

Henry G. Sanchez:

Feels very Posey

David Artura:

I think you're trying to do too much with this shot, like you're trying to hit every beat of the dialogue. A clip this short needs only a few poses. Too many and it gets too confusing and the transitions become too hurried.

Damian Isherwood:

Really like what you have going. I do find that your timing being pretty close on all his actions it becomes a bit poppy. Nice facial anim. Overal quite well done.

John:

great poses but it kind of seems like you tried to fit too much in the alloted time. great mouth sync and facial expressions.

Seth Taylor:

Shapr, great snappy gestures. Love it

Ritwik Nag:

Great job!! Was a pleasure to watch....

Ciaran:

the synch is way off on my computer here so I'm finding it difficult to really judge it but it's good work. I find I don't really like over-the-top stuff (or at least I'm quick to judge something as being over-the-top) but even though this is broad and action-packed, I think you did it well. I don't know who animated Woody on Toy Story but it has a similar feel to me. I hope you don't find that annoying or offensive :) it just occurred to me. I really love how his hand 'stutters' when he stutters with "this..eh..this girl..."
Really good stuff

Mat Thompson:

While the animation was of good quality all the accents hit the same levels. If the levels had differed this piece would have really been up there.

Nate Dorn:

looks good, slightly robotronic with the poses. Might be a little over animated.

Emmanuel Vergne:

nice but too "snappy", try to have more fluidity

Dan Dulberger:

Some moves are alittle bit quick for my taste, and come out very much as just zipping from pose to pose rather than naturally progressing from pose to pose. And if those poses are evenly distributed over time it gets very repetitive and annoying to watch.

Oren Bentov:

the movment is nice but it looks like you are trying to express every word in his acting,too many poses :)

Michael Twentyman:

This is pretty good. I really don't like the gesture to the forehead around 260, and some of the motion is far too grand for the voice. Other than that, nice work.

Trevor Hunter:

hahaha

i didn't catch that snot bubbel the first time. i really like the flow of this is is really snappy and stays that way right through

nice wor

Paulo Clayton:

Really well done, would be even better IMHO without the snot dripping down. The motion of the head combined with the sound is enough.

Robert Tighe:

nice timinig here. The poses are a bit tires but the manic energy really suits this. Overall nice work!

selvaraj:

very goog animation

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Nice job, I like the poses and snappy motion. I don't like the move-on-every-word feel though. I think the clip is more contained, but that's a personal thing. Congratulations.

Nanda van Dijk:

i love the stress you put in to your character. i just think i miss a bit of unity. maybe becouse he chances his direction a bit to often i think. real nice job though

Nigel Style:

Too many ideas! Needs some focusing!