Marcos Rezende:

good sequence...
Some things I realized.. the lipsync is a bit late and there are many action happening in the same frame...

HariNarayan:

Nice & simple
but something is missing @ the end ..
gud work !!

Bill Drastal:

He has the same expression on his face. He's thinking of a lot, I thought you could have added some more facial expressions. But good job on the animation.

Matt Kenley:

talking to the camera/audience is a big no no. everything else looks good.

Joseph K. Garrahan:

a bit too snappy.

Andy van Straten:

nice, tight animation. In the dialog 'Thought' is quite extreme but your pose doesn't reflect that. otherwise I like

John Erickson:

I like the suttle hand movement at 'maybe ya know' the leg movement during the whole piece is quite good as well. His eyes appear a bit dead at times since they are wide open much of the time. More movement with the hands in the beginning could make it better as well.

Aaron Clement:

I like the setting. I didn't get a lot of expression from his eyes. I like the ending where he put his knee up on his leg... good stuff.

Steve Clarke:

Iike the gestures on this particularly the arm rest at the end. However the moves are slightly delayed from the dialogue. Loses points for that but overall i liked it.

kienwei80:

Lipsync need to polish more.

W Jacob Gardner:

diagonal stripes died in the 60s. hahah.
but seriously, use the eyelids more, hes wide-eyed thru the whole thing - like hes scared. and cut the amount of gestures in half

Chris Welsby:

some nice poses there, i thik the thing that stands out the most for me is the pose when he says 'girl'. I think the pose is a little too late. When i act out the move i find I am in the pose just before i say the word. I think if you moved the pose forward then had a holding posewith some head movement to sell the dialogue it would really improve it.

Stuart Livingston:

Some parts aren't time perfectly well, character doesn't really express himself that much

Dan Dulberger:

THe middle part was the best. The lean back and sit comfortably move at the end seems odd and doesn't keep the same presence as the rest. Nice smooth animation overall.

Mariya Kalachova:

It's good but my only comment is that it's a little distracting that he's looking offstage for so long without much reason, not good staging methinks.. I like the last post though.

Roger Feron:

Not sure if it's the character limitations, but the face looked a little expressionless... could be just the small round eyes. A few moves felt snappy, but over all was really nice.

Gurneet Singh Khahra:

cushion is missing in some poses,
nice try

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Not bad, you chosen a set of poses and stuck with them. I'd suggest work the timing a little, seems to me some of the poses are too held and others snap too much.

Giovanni:

Why he is not looking at the camera (or in the direfction of the camera?).
This would make the "communication" with the viewer stronger, I think.
Good work!

Rami Daoud:

there is something wrong, i don't know if it's a codec prob. or it's ur curves problem..

Chris de Souza:

This is good! I like the mix of snappy and soft timing that you're using. His focus seems to be a little all over the place though.

Cole Higgins:

its cool, but I dislike the fact that hes talking to men as a audience member. I think it would be better if he was talking to somebody in the room.

Paul Borawski Jr.:

Your animation is pretty good, but the lip sync is not timed right and seems mushy. My main problem with this is the story telling part. I don't understand why he talks to the camera and then off to the side and back again.

Jorge Rodiles:

I’m little confuse about who's it he talking the camera or the guy "in front of him"