Lauren Andersson:

nice timing

Joseph K. Garrahan:

Very good and subtle throughout. A little overacting when he points to the door. 108-125 could be a little smoother, maybe with more curves to the movement. But I like it a lot.

Aaron Clement:

Needs more follow through... everything stops on the same pose/frame. The ending was good acting wise... but I felt he should have looks back at him/her to finish off... felt like he was looking away for too long... The timing was good for the most part.

Carol:

He feels very stiff to me. There is a definite need for some follow-through in the whole body. The shapes in the face feel limited - maybe add more expression in the eyes, and a bit more detail in the mouth.

Eric Huang:

Nice job, definitely gets the job done :)

Michael Vandenhoven:

I like the acting but I felt that some of the mouth shapes wern't on the money

John Erickson:

nice poses. just at 'girl that he loves' he is pointing out the door but nothing is there. seems a bit confusing thinkgin what is he pointing at? good job overall

Gregory Naud:

Watch out for the lipsync. ACting is kinda good though.

Alexis St-Laurent:

Nice work. I just find it all too......monochord. It's not the exact word I'm looking for" It's just that the same movements are coming back during the scene. Having his arms go down again and again takes the rythm away from your scene. It's the only thing keeping me from rating it higher...sorry

Gurneet Singh Khahra:

character spine is not bending..

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Not bad, you got some nice acting poses, timing and holds. You might need to add to the flexibility of the character and tone down some poses in favor of the ones in the meaningful part of the clip. The lipsync could use dome work, but Alfred is a bit of a pain for that.

BTW, that wig is awful!!!

Eric Scheur:

I really like the way you have him play with the door handle at the end! Nice detail that really helps sell this character as being alive in his environment. :)

I'm looking at your lipsyc, and while it looks pretty good in the beginning of the scene, towards the end it doesn't seem to read as well.

Particularly at "Maybe, you know"... I think that the "maybe" at 175 should have the mouth open wider for the "ay" sound. Pay attention to how much your jaw moves up and down when you say that line, going into the "EE"-- The EE is also something that I feel like we should see around 182, but the mouth currently looks a little more like an "eh", so you miss the end of "maybe" and the beginning of "you know," which should be wider and more of a closed mouth (so that we see the teeth nearly together)

On the whole, though, this is looking nice. Good work!

Rajesh Gupta:

Face look flat. Please try to exaggerate expressions.