Interpretation of Karma

Final Rating: 4.36. Finished: 65 out of 131 entries.
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Animator: Jacopo Armani

Description: Bloke has believed in his personal interpretation of Karma. Until today.

Experience: A couple of years

Time taken: 30-40 hours

Comments:

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Daniel Huertas:

it's nice that you toned down the arm going to his nose.. but i would make him go down to meet the arm.. cuz it seems more natural that way.. well i do that when i need to clean my nose hehehe.. nice lipsync though

David Meyers:

Nice animation, it would be nice to see more than just a closeup of his head. otherwise i think you did a good job on the facial animation.

Tyler Phillips:

Would like to see more of the body, though it's a nice lip sync

Aaron Jonas:

good start. I feel with this VO you could show more of the body

Tom Law:

Really nice idea with just focusing on the face

John Erickson:

great lip synching and eye/brow movement. There is just so much more you can do with the body.

Eric Huang:

Not bad, I feel like you need a better facial setup than what's on this guy if you're focusing on facial animation.

Aaron Clement:

I like it... Some nice subtle acting... and the hand wipe helped to break things up, too! Maybe if we could see the arms/hands more... that would have helped with the body language... but what you have isn't too bad all the same... keep up the good work!

Jeremy Schichtel:

cant see any acting, pretty good lip synch

Tom Cho:

The face acting is fine but perhaps the camera could've been pulled out more to see more physical acting.

Derek:

need more expression on a close up like this. Might be a poor rig choice

Damian Isherwood:

would be nice to see more of the body to see posing and acting.

Nate Dorn:

looks a little delayed

Emmanuel Vergne:

the "m" on "maybe" could be clearer, like the one on the second "him"

Wolfram Kampffmeyer:

would be better if you showed the whole body and animated it.

Giovanni:

The face you worked with is pretty unexpressive in itself, so to keep the camera just on it and ignore for most of the 11 seconds the body doesn't help too much

Ciaran:

You really need to open up those eyelids, being half closed the whole time keeps his attitude too relaxed. Otherwise, not bad. I like the shoulder shrug.

Paul Borawski Jr.:

I feel the mouth shapes don't hit correctly at times and a sniffle is missed, and it seems sort of flat.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Not bad, but the character is not a good choice for a close up it lacks appeal.

William Matthew Robertson:

Bloke does have a very expressive face and you've animated it very well, but for acting tests like this it's a good idea to show at least the whole upper body area as well.