florian eberle:

very well done animation, but i feel its a bit too much of acting, too much movement at times (especially the fingers), poses are too strong i think.
but the animation, wow, i like its overall snappiness

Bill Drastal:

Great animation, but some of the poses you chose don't seem to match well with the voice track.

Gianmichele Mariani:

Mmmm...the acting does not seem to fit what are the inner thoughts from the dialogue. You got the technique but the acting choices are somewhat off

Matthew Moore:

good, but keyframes seem a little extreme at times

Sunny Kharbanda:

I think you're over-applying the principles of animation. Try focusing on the acting instead, and pick gestures that convey the character's state of mind instead.

Daniel Huertas:

nice movements but some of the poses didn't have any meaning with the audio clip.. try to act it out and you would find better ways to show your acting with extreme poses but that feel natural... great effort.

Matt Johnson:

Snappy animation is nice..maybe tone it down in some areas so everything is not so quick and moving. Give him time to get the energy to build that up in places. Love the energy and facial expressions.

Olivier Ladeuix:

seems a bit overanimated but why not? Works for me

Gregory Marlow:

Good animation but some of the poses dont really make a lot of sense.

Andy van Straten:

looking good... its a little distracting having your character bounce around SO much.. if you had some subtler poses in amongst the extreme ones... good work tho

John Erickson:

Great poses. I love the poses during his sniffle and stutter. There are a couple of times where he just freezes into a pose which deadens it a bit. at the end of 'i thought' , 'help him', 'this uh' 'that he loves'. Just some slight movement such as easing back out of the pose slightly would liven it up a bit.

james:

wayyyyyy to much acting. less is more

Eric Huang:

Too pose-to-posey for me... overlap the transitions.

Ryan Hagen:

The hands are a bit much for me. But all in all I liked it a lot. A bit too snappy I think for the dialog, but a fun one to watch. Good job, keep rockin'.

Steve Clarke:

I like the style to this a lot and has a lot of character.The "Change for me" gestures arent quite right though. Great effort overall.

Marcos:

Great snappy animation and great poses pushing the attitudes a little bit more would make it really great

Justin Weg:

I think it's a bit too snappy for the tone of the line

Ritwik Nag:

WOW!!!

James Hunt:

great poses, but you have to many big movements. try mixing big action with more suttle action.

Chris Bull:

Was good but just feels like is snapping to too many poses throughout.

Tomas Ortiz:

Good work just try to make the motions in between key frames mre fluid. Add some blur between big move ments especialy with his arms/hands

Noshin:

Thats great work

Dan Dulberger:

It's very much only zipping from pose to pose. Although done really really well, it gets annoying after awhile.

David Artura:

It's got a lot of snap to it, I suppose that's just your style. Overall it really plays well.

Mariya Kalachova:

I don't really think some of the poses go with the dialogue, the animation is really very good but it doesn't match the mood, and is a little distracting. Such as the fingers shaking on 'get him'.

Seth Taylor:

thos eyebrows really amp up the anger in this one. Interesting and almost scary

Srikanth:

There are too many poses...

Roshan.k:

ur acting has no relation with the dialog. looks like u got some cute looking poses and snappy timing. but if it's not helping u to tell the story, u fail as an animator. :)

Roger Feron:

Some of those poses seem out of place, like when he says " Get him this ah... ". Also, I think many of his poses are 'too big', making it feel like a dance. I like the timing, although keeping a bit of movement during the holds would make him feel more alive.

Aaron Clement:

Too blocky... Your moving holds need to move more. Don't have everything happen at the same time... Just needs braking up some more.

Mark Kennedy:

Animation is quite good. Too many ideas for a short time. Maybe choose one or two big gestures and have some more subtle stuff. This would add more contrast to the performance.

Sander Kamermans:

nice animation. But the pose when he says "get him this" is very odd for the sound fragment. I don't understand why he should do that =)

Max Perelman:

Good mechanics--the acting's a bit busy (Ac...Cent...Ing...Ev...Ry...Syll...Ah...Ble...)
for instance, the finger twiddle on "I thought" is nice but then when there's more quick hand movement on "that I..." it dampens any of the possible contrast and keeps everything too even.

Wolfram Kampffmeyer:

nice dynamic and interesting poses, but i don't understand most of the poses. just don't fit to the text he speakes.

Giovanni:

I like the maniacal hysteria you gave him!

Mike Courtney:

last few poses seem rushed

Meaghan Arbital:

A bit overacted, think subtler movements of actors in films.

Chris Dardis:

good motion, but a bit overdone. It can't all be big :)

Nigel Style:

Too many ideas/poses, needs focusing.

Jorge Zagatto:

Good, very well animated, but I felt the body didn't say the same as the mouth did. Movements felt a little bit odd. But I did like the entrance. Very good anyway!