Brad Regier:

Ha ha! I love it. Put wings on him and have him wearing nothing but a diaper.

HariNarayan:

Too much use of hands !!

Bill Drastal:

Some of the actions are very erratic, and don't help the acting.

Daniel Huertas:

try to move your character around when you attempt to do too many poses.. cuz the problem now are the feet that look nailed to the floor.. i liked the end though

Ozgur Yildirim:

Not bad, but too much poses there, many of which don't look proper to the voice, I think. And the animation looks too floaty.

Jack Daniels:

nice idea! The first pose seems to be late. The posing from 80 to 100 resembles a caveman or ape, which is quite funny, if that's what you were going for. I like it!

Jesse Baumgartner:

If you shifted his weight around a little bit, it would help this scene. His feet are stuck on the ground and don't move at all. You have some nice movement and poses, though.

Alonso Soriano:

he feels nailed to the ground, his gestures don't feel like extensions of his thoughts, more like gestures just for the sake of gesturing

Andrew Stovesand:

I like most of it, he just seems to be moving a bit too much.

Aidan Martin:

really cool just feels like the gestures are happening after the fact, and should happen just before the dialog cue's, the Disney method was for the gestures to hit 4 frames before the lip sync. But it's absolutely all there

Taber Dunipace:

Try to get the action across more simply with less little actions that distract from the main acting. The poses this character is doing seem unnatural and forced. Try recording yourself over and over on camera to get more natural movements. The wrong idea will feel silly and unnecessary.

Adam Knight:

Love the idea.

Eric Huang:

Too many poses :). But not bad..

Andrew Linke:

Love the bow and arrow, and the jail door slamming afterwards very creative. The sniffle was slightly late but otherwise very creative.

Josh Doohen:

same pose in the beginning and end, maybe change that pose before his shoulders shrug at the end.
good anim!

david arthur:

nice idea, could be polished more

John Erickson:

nice arm movement. just the feet are locked down in the same spot the whole piece. just some small movement with him shifting his weight off the feet woul liven it up more.

David Artura:

I think you're trying to do too much with this shot, like you're trying to hit every beat of the dialogue. A clip this short needs only a few poses. Too many and it gets too confusing and the transitions become too hurried.

Dan Dulberger:

He looks like he's popping (break dance style). Would've definitly rated higher if he wasn't.

Nate Dorn:

a little over animated, good job though

Mariya Kalachova:

ha ha I love the idea, but he moves a bit like a mime at 'get him' maybe a bit too much gesticulation. Really good though!

Aaron Clement:

I like the concept... good use of imagination by having him in prison. The staging of the bow could have been clearer, though... I didn't pick it as a bow a t first. Some of the actions felt cliche... the dejected pose at the end was good. You did have some nice exaggeration in there... just a little too much at times... Good effort.

Gino Garibaldi:

i likes =P

selvaraj:

goog animation

Paul Borawski Jr.:

too many poses and too much movement. nice timing through most of it though.