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Final Rating: 5.52. Finished: 23 out of 131 entries.
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Animator: Anat Tzach

Description: couple walk together

Experience: Some

Time taken: one week

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Joseph K. Garrahan:

very natural.

Daniel Huertas:

the weird walk before she stops at the end from the woman was a little distracting to me i would make it more simple..

Justin G:

ambitious

Matt Kenley:

dude, that mustve taken you a long time, that second character might not be necessary, try bringing the camera in closer and just have him talk off screen at the end. Just for simplicities sake, you did a alot of work

jim Duffy:

Nice walk cycles!

Jen:

They are both very hunched forward, the walk cycles are very smooth though

kimleow:

not a big fan of the HELP part but i like the begining good work

Aaron Jonas:

nice work. I like the walk cycle.

John Erickson:

great idea and timing. his shoulders could twist more to add a bit more life into the walk. great job overall.

Charlotte Wilcock:

thats really good seeing a walk cycle with acting. Nice!

Aaron Clement:

I don't think the walking was necessary and was more of a distraction for me... The guy's arms didn't seem to flow right... the weight felt off throughout... The ending was good... but you should have focused more on the acting and less on the walking in my opinion.

Josh Doohen:

Not too shabby:) good expression. body movement a lil strange in some parts, but overall decent.

V_I_C_K_Y:

I Liked it..!

Dhar:

Great casual atmosphere, everything felt natural. Nice work.

Taber Dunipace:

A nice scene with some good acting. The animation is pretty boring though and could use better observance of principals. Particularly exaggeration.

Eric Huang:

I like it, nice job :)

evan:

arms too stiff on walk cycle

Alonso Soriano:

ooh, walk and talk. really nice, really like how he keeps checking in on her to see that she's paying attention. I think you need some tiny eases on the head, seems a bit linearly curved to me for some reason

kienwei80:

Both characters' legs need to polish more.

W Jacob Gardner:

dont show that much of the bodies if there is no point.
You can still show them walking with a torso shot. we will feel it in their movements. Watch tv or movies closely, you see this all the time.

Tom Cho:

Very nice challenge you set up for yourself by making it a walking conversation.

Eun Ki:

Great idea!!! but walkcycle is little bit pops and unnatural...

David Artura:

Really work on eliminating the knee pops through out. I think they're the weakest part of the shot.

Srikanth:

nice job...

vinay:

very unique. love the way u potraid it

Giovanni:

What's the point to have another character in the animation iof she is not doing anything?
Better to focus on the speaker and save that effort, don't you think?

Paulo Clayton:

Nicely done acting while walking! Very convincing.