Crow
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Daryl Marples:
Good body animation, I'm not sure the face is 'acting' and the mouth doesn't move enough for what is quite an emotional speech.
Matthew Moore:
the lighting/rendering i find is a bit off putting, and the character seems a little overwhelming
Matt Kenley:
character is so odd it is taking away from the animation, I wouldnt use this guy again
Olivier Ladeuix:
what is the blink about?
Mark:
needs work on the lip sync
John Erickson:
hand timing at 'help him in some way' seems off. good overall
Pete Y:
nice understated animation
Dhar:
Great use of space, contrasting arcs - job well done.
Adam Knight:
Cool character.
Debra Wootton:
love the pulling of the bow tie
Ann-Marie Denham:
Not sure about the wink at the end.
Aaron Clement:
Not too bad... appropriate considering it lies near Halloween. The acting choices arn't bad... just the blink at the end didn't register for me.
Josh Doohen:
i dunno man. that suit is throwing me off, is that a pimp scarecrow?
diganta:
take care of lypsine
kienwei80:
His hat blocks his facial expression and lipsync.
David Artura:
I think it's a decent shot overall. I feel that you could tone down the upperbody movement some. It causes the head to be a bit all over the place. That makes it harder to follow the character and keep up with the lip sync.
Steve Clarke:
Unusual character which i like, but i think the moves need to be better transitioned and better timed in places.
selvaraj:
good animation
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
You're not hearing the clip, think about what he's saying. He's supposed to feel the clip not just move with it. Nice character though.
Erick Rohn:
I like the use of the cane. It doesn't just seem like a useless prop in his hand, but he actually leans on it a couple different ways, which seems totally natural to the character. The animation is well done, but I wonder if you couldn't make it "snappier" to really HIT the poses. Right around frame 120-140 when he shifts screen left, he moves very quickly and hits the pose nice. I'd like to see more of that.
Dan Dulberger:
Hard to get emotions across with no pupils or eyebrows. Some eyebrow action that changed the shape of the eyes adequatly (to show sadness, anger etc) would have helped alot I think.
Mike Courtney:
popping in animation
Ciaran:
wow. all that in one month? Good work. The only thing I don't like is the sniff/wiping his nose, it's just a bit over the top for me. It's like he's pointing off screen and then he doesn't. Good stuff though. Lots of stars :)









Animator: David Seymour
Description: block and tweak
Experience: 0 years
Time taken: 10 hrs