Crow

Final Rating: 4.23. Finished: 76 out of 131 entries.
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Animator: David Seymour

Description: block and tweak

Experience: 0 years

Time taken: 10 hrs

Comments:

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Daryl Marples:

Good body animation, I'm not sure the face is 'acting' and the mouth doesn't move enough for what is quite an emotional speech.

Matthew Moore:

the lighting/rendering i find is a bit off putting, and the character seems a little overwhelming

Matt Kenley:

character is so odd it is taking away from the animation, I wouldnt use this guy again

Olivier Ladeuix:

what is the blink about?

Mark:

needs work on the lip sync

John Erickson:

hand timing at 'help him in some way' seems off. good overall

Pete Y:

nice understated animation

Dhar:

Great use of space, contrasting arcs - job well done.

Adam Knight:

Cool character.

Debra Wootton:

love the pulling of the bow tie

Ann-Marie Denham:

Not sure about the wink at the end.

Aaron Clement:

Not too bad... appropriate considering it lies near Halloween. The acting choices arn't bad... just the blink at the end didn't register for me.

Josh Doohen:

i dunno man. that suit is throwing me off, is that a pimp scarecrow?

diganta:

take care of lypsine

kienwei80:

His hat blocks his facial expression and lipsync.

David Artura:

I think it's a decent shot overall. I feel that you could tone down the upperbody movement some. It causes the head to be a bit all over the place. That makes it harder to follow the character and keep up with the lip sync.

Steve Clarke:

Unusual character which i like, but i think the moves need to be better transitioned and better timed in places.

selvaraj:

good animation

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

You're not hearing the clip, think about what he's saying. He's supposed to feel the clip not just move with it. Nice character though.

Erick Rohn:

I like the use of the cane. It doesn't just seem like a useless prop in his hand, but he actually leans on it a couple different ways, which seems totally natural to the character. The animation is well done, but I wonder if you couldn't make it "snappier" to really HIT the poses. Right around frame 120-140 when he shifts screen left, he moves very quickly and hits the pose nice. I'd like to see more of that.

Dan Dulberger:

Hard to get emotions across with no pupils or eyebrows. Some eyebrow action that changed the shape of the eyes adequatly (to show sadness, anger etc) would have helped alot I think.

Mike Courtney:

popping in animation

Ciaran:

wow. all that in one month? Good work. The only thing I don't like is the sniff/wiping his nose, it's just a bit over the top for me. It's like he's pointing off screen and then he doesn't. Good stuff though. Lots of stars :)