Rendezvous in the Park

Final Rating: 5.52. Finished: 23 out of 131 entries.
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Animator: David Bokser

Description: Jeff finally admits to why he helped a complete stranger capture the love of his life.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 30 hours

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Daniel Huertas:

nice job, i like the character and how you manage his acting... I would change the intensity of the dialogue though.. check if your phrasing goes with the audio clip and work from that... also for the hand gestures it seemed that you only offset the keys of each other but they were the same poses.... and at the end line " for me" the intensity is down in the audio clip, but in your pose for me sounded like "for MEE!" .. i would change the background picture also.. a white or black background is good enough..

nice job.

Jack Daniels:

I don't know why, but this model reminds me of Bob Saget. Now that's hi-larious!

Daryl Marples:

Very good thinking and emotion

Haakon Gaarder:

very nice, maybe a little stiff at the beginning.

Craig Peck:

Poses are too similar. Need more variety but looking good :)

David Artura:

Good, solid effort. some of the transitions are a bit hurried and have some overshoot, but these are easily handled.

Andy Anderson:

This is great. Would be better if the mouth was a bit more clear to see. I think the shadow and the huge nose makes it hard to read, but great stuff.

Cody Woodard:

That last "me" gesture looked great expecially with the hands. Great Job

Gregory Marlow:

really nice motion. Needs a little more moving holds. But otherwise really good.

Aaron Clement:

The ending was nice... Kinda reminded me of a lady. Nice and fluid for the ending... good job there.

John Erickson:

the animation on the eyes is awesome. i didnt even really see anything else the first couple views. the acting in the eyes says it all. great job

John:

great expressions and hand movements

Ozgur Yildirim:

nice character.

Dan Dulberger:

It was ok. I think it would help the character if his eyes weren't so wide open already by default or your simply overusing the effect.

Meaghan Arbital:

I wish his face had more expression to it, at least around the mouth, it's close but not quite there.

Robert Tighe:

Really nice work. Just need some work on your polishing and your mouth shapes.ok?

Rajesh Gupta:

It looks you have given enough facial expression but I don't know why it looks yet flat to me. I may be wrong but try to use overlapping in eye brows, eye lids while closing and a bit stretching and squashing will make it more convincing. But over all I like your animation. Great job!!!

William Matthew Robertson:

Love this! You could use a liiittle more overlap on the hands in the first part of the shot, but this is still really great!

James:

Great :)

Jorge Zagatto:

I really liked when he says "me"

Christiaan Moleman:

The "thought" gesture seems a bit jittery. Could be that it doesn't give the audience a chance to read the first pose. I would tone down the head shake.

Really like the rest though.