Joseph K. Garrahan:

too many poses.

Matt Johnson:

Really liked the main character acions. I would have toned down the guy breathing in the bg because it pulls from the main action. Maybe gesture to him and suttle main character actions and then come back strong so we refocus on him. Keep it up!

Patrick Alessi:

The start is very destracting with too many poses and too much movement.

I LOOOOVE the "Maybe, you know..." Hair thing... Fantastic idea;D

Tyler Phillips:

Nice animation. I think it could use some holds.

Jeranimo:

Over animated. Good effort though.

Trevor Hunter:

Hey this is my first time rating!

i like the idea when he makes the shape of the woman's body with his hands frm 120-147, it really fits the style. i just don't think you stuck with it long enough though. keep an idea and hold the pose on screen for a longer period of time. way to many poses. and your lip sync needs some more attention.
nice work!

Josh Doohen:

nice job for some 2d action

Eric Mesa:

love the animation a lot. I especially love the attention to the eyes

Aaron Clement:

I didn't get it... Felt too busy. Was interesting... but you lost me with where you were going with it.

Ryan Magill:

always appreciate the 2D, nice work. It feels a little stiff/stationary though. His shoulders never really change in height.

Bruno Celegão Monteiro:

Nice one!!!!

Jarred de Beer:

Yay 2d! :)

Nice, I think he moves around abit too much though

Heverton:

I think it was a bit jumping, missing couple frame to make the animation smoothly !

Renaud Déchaux:

Good traditional animation, but I think there is too much poses.

Tom Cho:

Great poses!

Derek:

Keep it simple!

Stuart Livingston:

Some expressions didn't seem to make much sense particularly the one at the very end but the concept is funny, but the lipsync seemed way off (hopefully just a problem with the video?). Anyway this is a decent effort

Mike Feil:

good job but too much is going on I think, too many gestures

Paul Borawski Jr.:

Love seeing 2D! But the staging of the foreground and the background is too conflicting. Once again I think there are way too many gestures and some of them don't even sync with the dialogue.

James:

Some nice ideas in the acting, but I think that maybe you're trying to make him do too much. Simplify the action a bit, you don't need so many poses.

Jorge Rodiles:

I think it needs more inbetweens to be perfect!