Jack Daniels:

Sliding...

Joseph K. Garrahan:

Too erratic.

Jesse Baumgartner:

The walk is nice. It has a nice bounce to it, but his feet are sliding all over the place. His mouth shapes are bit weird in some places, a little too exaggerated.

Eric Huang:

Nice character! The walk is odd and some of the lipsync is off.. the mouth is moving too much.

Jen:

Clever idea. I dont know if the tone of voice at the end quite matches the surprise. I love the ending expression though, you really pushed it!

Andy Anderson:

He looks like he is ice skating at the beginning because his feet slide so much. Also when he turns the corner he looks off balance and would probably fall. good effort

Gregory Marlow:

feet slipping a lot.

Aaron Jonas:

nice work. watch out for the poping joints

Pritish Dogra:

Foot slipping. Good attempt at pushing the expression

Michael Vandenhoven:

Nice, but it seemed like there was a bit of foot slide at the start

John Erickson:

funny idea. his weight is off on his walk. he is off centered during the turn around the corner. the tone of the dialogue at the end does not reflect what is going on in the animation.

Ozgur Yildirim:

Very interesting ending!
:)

Ann-Marie Denham:

The reaction at the end is a bit too soon, since I don't feel it's reflected in the dialogue. Nice idea though.

Steve Clarke:

A tad awkward in most areas movement-wise if honest. Needs to distribute weight much better and some of the movements seemed too quick as if trying to fit in too much.

Aaron Clement:

Looks as though he's already found his girl. Entertaining clip. Watch the feet slipping on the pavement. Maybe if he didn't have as far to walk would have been better... I like the lighting.

Bilal Ahmad:

nice effort

W Jacob Gardner:

there is no time to read that ending 'take'

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Nice setup. But really he could be saying anything. He's just walking (that needs work too) and waving his hands franticly. Walking and acting convincingly is pretty tough, shoot a little lower.

Derek:

like the acting choices, but the walk is bad and the feet slide. Need to finesse

Freddy Burgos:

Nice job here! His feet seem to slip a bit during that first shot with him walking. Great idea to have him on the phone and running into the couple!

Roshan.k:

u lost it in the last part. finish the dialog and then see them and then react..keep it clear ..nice try man

Sander Kamermans:

why is he angry if he sees them togettor? that is what he wanted isn't it? And I think you should look at your walk cycle a bit more because he walks funny.

Mike Courtney:

lip sync needs work

tim boggs:

you left the misconception that he was going to cross the street,only to turn to his left,other than that awesome work.

Giovanni:

The animation details need to be refined. The camera cut in the middle is a little akward, but you show a great imagination!

Jorge Rodiles:

In the line when he said.."this girl he loves" the mouth shape of the O in Loves, I think its a little large