Hernán Bruna:

Just dont like the lipsync, the other movements were good

Andrew Stovesand:

I like the glasses...

Daniel Huertas:

in the pose "this girl that he loves" he holds a weird pose that for siluette and appealing doesn't work on the screen... try to check the lipsync also.. and i would tone down the glasses movement cuz if it would move like that i would have lost them from the begining.. good effort!

Matt Kenley:

great character, nice with the glasses

Joseph K. Garrahan:

the poses seem late. but interesting character.

David Alvarez:

In my opinion glasses movement are distracting and borrows the emotion the character tries to convey.

David Artura:

I would suggest not trying to hit every beat of the dialogue with a separate pose. The clip os too short to allow for that many transitions and it comes off as confusing.

Eric Huang:

My own :)

Matt Johnson:

Really good reactions and timing. I would only say to adjust his reactions and phrasing. All of his actions are pretty broad and it makes them seem to exagerated. Make some big, some small to add the flavor to it.

Andy Anderson:

I really like what you did with the table bounce.

Andy van Straten:

nice... i really felt like he should adjust his glasses as soon as they came loose!

Jeranimo:

You're trying to show secondary action in the glasses. Thats a good effort but your timing is totally wrong. It is flying up too early!

Christopher Benhase:

The lipsync seems off alittle but other than that I really like his movements.

Rene:

great work with the glasses

John Erickson:

some good poses and secondary motion, eyeglasses are good touch. timing of the poses are off a bit at times.

Aaron Clement:

Too random. He just moves around too much... If he's going to move forward, do it with more purpose... just too much noise... I like the glasses... maybe could have done something with the glasses.

kienwei80:

Not bad. But there is a too fast action in the end. ( laying back on his chair)

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Work with the clip, look for changes in the energy and use that with your poses, every pose and every move seems to have the same intensity.

Watch for the fingers, some of the poses are wierd. The IK hand on f300 is completely dead, watch out for that.

The lipsync is nowhere to be seen, work on that.

Mat Thompson:

I saw this one in the wips I think and I think the last version I saw was stronger. Maybe one or two gestures less with more focus on them may have carried better....that said nice piece with a good use of the accents.

Victor Wong:

There are volume issues with the speaker constantly moving forward and back, relative to the chair back.

Dan Dulberger:

WHat is the extra push forward after "I thought..."!? Looked odd. Otherwise it was cool.

Chris de Souza:

Some very nice overlapping actions in this.

Ciaran:

Nice work. Broad and over the top but in a good way :) well done.

selvaraj:

very goog animation