Deep Sigh

Final Rating: 5.08. Finished: 40 out of 131 entries.
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Animator: Jen

Description: ToonBoom3.5
First entry, excited to participate, enjoyed the assignment! Cheers to all!
JenStolzer

Experience: College Senior Majoring in Animation

Time taken: 10-12 hrs

Comments:

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Bill Drastal:

Looks almost rotoscoped because of the way he moves, I'd say watch your construction. But great expressions and acting.

Brad Regier:

Pretty good poses.
A little too busy. You might take advantage of the fact that it's 2D by keeping him more still.

David Alvarez:

I think the weakest part in this animation is that the volume and proportions of the character are changing to the point to result a bit distracting. Other than that I think this animation is quite good.

Eric Huang:

A little too jittery for my taste, but not bad!

Andy Anderson:

looks like a quick rotoscoping.

Lauren Wells:

some really nice moments, maybe it could be a little simpler.

Andrew Stovesand:

Gotta love the 2d

Josh Doohen:

i like it, smooth drawings, swell poses!

Bruno Celegão Monteiro:

hey dude its kinda nice but beware the flicking cause its taking a lot of attention from the action it self so work on that to see more clearer the holds^^

John Erickson:

some good poses and timing. nice style.

Ann-Marie Denham:

The jitter is a little bit distracting.

Aaron Clement:

He changes expression too much throughout... he just moves too much.

evan:

the flash makes it a little jittery, im sure you are a smoother animator in other medias, excellent poses and secondary action

Steve Clarke:

I like 90% of the gestures, but found the last set of expressions to be a bit weird. His face seems to go a bit strange. Very good timing on it all though.

Ritwik Nag:

Nice style!!

kienwei80:

Good try. Good effort!

Tomas Ortiz:

Good effort. Don't be scared to pause in some frames. There is such a thing as moving too much. Suttle pauses help increase belivability .

Eun Ki:

I love your key poses especially "maybe you know.."
Good Job!! nice work!

John:

good expressions. it seems pretty squishy though because the head doesn't stay a consistant size. its kindof choppy but the emotion is good :)

John Cruz:

Really interesting

Emmanuel Vergne:

moves too much
try to choose strong poses that you can keep longer

Meaghan Arbital:

I love the use of 2D. I wish it bobbed around a little bit less, maybe a tiny bit more 'smooth', but still with roughness to it. At least just in the head area. Otherwise, great!

Robert Tighe:

This is some rally nice work, The timing is nice. Pretty good poses too. Just work on your draftsmanship. I understand it may be a style but IMO it hurts you.