Deep Sigh
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Bill Drastal:
Looks almost rotoscoped because of the way he moves, I'd say watch your construction. But great expressions and acting.
Brad Regier:
Pretty good poses.
A little too busy. You might take advantage of the fact that it's 2D by keeping him more still.
David Alvarez:
I think the weakest part in this animation is that the volume and proportions of the character are changing to the point to result a bit distracting. Other than that I think this animation is quite good.
Eric Huang:
A little too jittery for my taste, but not bad!
Andy Anderson:
looks like a quick rotoscoping.
Lauren Wells:
some really nice moments, maybe it could be a little simpler.
Andrew Stovesand:
Gotta love the 2d
Josh Doohen:
i like it, smooth drawings, swell poses!
Bruno Celegão Monteiro:
hey dude its kinda nice but beware the flicking cause its taking a lot of attention from the action it self so work on that to see more clearer the holds^^
John Erickson:
some good poses and timing. nice style.
Ann-Marie Denham:
The jitter is a little bit distracting.
Aaron Clement:
He changes expression too much throughout... he just moves too much.
evan:
the flash makes it a little jittery, im sure you are a smoother animator in other medias, excellent poses and secondary action
Steve Clarke:
I like 90% of the gestures, but found the last set of expressions to be a bit weird. His face seems to go a bit strange. Very good timing on it all though.
Ritwik Nag:
Nice style!!
kienwei80:
Good try. Good effort!
Tomas Ortiz:
Good effort. Don't be scared to pause in some frames. There is such a thing as moving too much. Suttle pauses help increase belivability .
Eun Ki:
I love your key poses especially "maybe you know.."
Good Job!! nice work!
John:
good expressions. it seems pretty squishy though because the head doesn't stay a consistant size. its kindof choppy but the emotion is good :)
John Cruz:
Really interesting
Emmanuel Vergne:
moves too much
try to choose strong poses that you can keep longer
Meaghan Arbital:
I love the use of 2D. I wish it bobbed around a little bit less, maybe a tiny bit more 'smooth', but still with roughness to it. At least just in the head area. Otherwise, great!
Robert Tighe:
This is some rally nice work, The timing is nice. Pretty good poses too. Just work on your draftsmanship. I understand it may be a style but IMO it hurts you.









Animator: Jen
Description: ToonBoom3.5
First entry, excited to participate, enjoyed the assignment! Cheers to all!
JenStolzer
Experience: College Senior Majoring in Animation
Time taken: 10-12 hrs