Brad Regier:

Poses are good; probably break up the twinning at the beginning a little, at least in terms of timing.

Jesse Baumgartner:

You have some nice poses, but the hands are twinning a lot. Breaking those up will help a lot.

Chris de Souza:

I like this one. Very expressive posing but it all seems to be timed out the same... Maybe vary some of your timing more so that there is a buildup in the action throughout.

Eric Huang:

Not bad. Your poses are too twinned, break up the arm gestures.

Rafi Ben Aharon:

nice work, i would suggest moving his legs a bit so he's not stuck to the ground

Matt Johnson:

Good timing and hitting the emotion with the lines. Watch the twinning in the poses.

Ozgur Yildirim:

Nice poses but the character moves too slow at 150-175.

Tyler Phillips:

Nice animation. I would be careful about the twinning with the hands in the beginning.

Andrew Stovesand:

I really like the hand gestures. Transition from "that maybe you know" seems a bit floaty.

Josh Doohen:

great expression, poses and timing!

Carol:

This is really believable, I like it. The expressions in the face show a lot of emotion, and the body gives the feeling of animated human movement without overdoing anything. My only critique is that the sniff at about frame 195 seems twitchy in the body - the face is good, but I want to see a bit of movement in the chest to signify a breath in the lungs, rather than just in the shoulders.

Bruno Celegão Monteiro:

nice but the poses are a bit even and theres not much action so you got a floating animation where everything comes and go but nothing really grabs the attention

Taber Dunipace:

Very strong all around but a bit mushy on the timing and bland on the acting choices. More exaggeration and contrast in speeds would help.

Eddie Chew:

awesome work

John Erickson:

Nice poses. I think at 'i thought' and 'help him' the poses are too symmetrical. just needs a little offsetting of keys and a bit of a different pose on the other side. After that the poses show being offset and assymetrical. Good job

Aaron Clement:

Feels symetrical. The timing is good... and some good exaggeration.

Alonso Soriano:

COG very still, very stiff line of action throughout, relative to our view at least

kienwei80:

not bad acting.

david arthur:

he moves a little slow, too much twinning on the hands

Tomas Ortiz:

Great job although the last few frames the lipsync needs more attention.

Damian Isherwood:

Needs more follow overlap action and remember to move in arcs not linear.

Mariya Kalachova:

Nice use of the arms! very good.

selvaraj:

good animation

Mat Thompson:

Really nice gesturing and acting choices. What seemed to let things down was your root animation, with that sorted this would have been very good indeed.

Emmanuel Vergne:

nice but be careful of "twinning"
i don't like the pose around the frame 190

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Nice timing and poses, but he seems to stay in a pretty uncomfortable stance. You've got some very short moves, the sniff is way too short, and others that are too long, like the transition to "change for me". Watch the timing on those. I like the acting choices suit the clip very well.

Cole Higgins:

Give him more character, right now his poses are a little even tempered. They dont tell me mutch about him as a character.

Victor Wong:

Watch out for twinning in arms in the early part of the animation.

Paul Borawski Jr.:

I really liked this, especially since I'm a fellow AMer, but something is really weird with your lip sync with this "girl that he loves". The timing is off and overall I think the lip sync could be more refined. But your body, brow, and eye movements are great!

Deanna Bishop:

Nice poses. Good job! Needs to be just a bit snappier. Maybe its just me, but the character seems a bit cross-eyed.