Rough love
October Competition Winner
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Mark Bogdanoff:
This one is just awesome. Wow.
Aaron Clement:
Some nice animation in here! Would have been nice to see some more interaction between the girl and the guy.... Your animation is pretty good... keep up the good work!
Ryan Hagen:
As far as draftsmanship and appeal this is great!!! I think it would've helped a lot if you would've added stronger anticipations in this. Especially at "Help him". It's a great peice of work though. Keep rockin'.
ArunVijayan:
very nice!!!...i like ur idea...animation is also awesome......but do u think its little lenghty.....
samy.oddjob@gmail.com:
the idea is really nice, animation is good, jsut your acting is really too much twining and cliche ... but nice work
Emmanuel Vergne:
Very nice animation, nice fluidity, good arcs and nice rythm on all the characters
i like the way the head moves on "i thought"
i don't really like the way the drawn character comes forward from frame 365 to 400, except that it's all good :)
vinay:
awesome. 2d rocks
kEViN:
Dude that was sweet!
Eric Huang:
Very nice! I love the concept :) and the execution is great too!
Josh Doohen:
very slick! love the toon style drawing!
Tom Law:
That was brilliant, well done
William Matthew Robertson:
Nice backstory. A little long, but nice. Very good animation too. The only thing that stood out was the stretch in the face on the word "for" in "change for me". Maybe stretch it out over a few frames, one frame was a bit harsh.
V_I_C_K_Y:
U R Trully A Winner Boss..!
Gill Frank:
brilliant. really nice timing and good flow to the animation.
realy love it!
Tomas Ortiz:
Awesome!!!
Paulo Clayton:
Love the style and the animation, but don't really get it. Really amazing animation, though.
Nanda van Dijk:
the eyelash part is realy outstanding. i also realy like the consept you put in your animation
Emmanuel:
WOW! Awesome animation! The only weakness I'd probably say about this is the time. Try getting to the point quicker.
Jesse Baumgartner:
Nice concept and execution.
Andrew Linke:
Love the 2d Animation, very fluid, The build in was slightly long but i like the idea and concept. Again very very fluid animation.
Lauren Andersson:
hahahahahah, adorable!
Jack Daniels:
Very nice! ...but aren't these supposed to be 11 second animations? Anyway, his reaction to her doesn't really make sense, as she seems to be giving him more of a coy look, rather than one of disapproval or what have you.
Ozawa:
Fantastic! I really love your work.
Matt Kenley:
WOW! im impressed, totally!
Carol:
what an outstanding animation! its awesome!! congrats
John Erickson:
nice acting on all the characters. great drawing skills.
Brad Regier:
And we have a winner!
Wow. You really did add silence to the audio track didn't you? :)
Amazing work!
Mathias AUBRY:
really good animation! congrats!
David Artura:
Fantastic job! Any time I see some traditional stuff, it just blows me away.
Congrats on the piece!
Seth Taylor:
That is beautiful! i especially love the little long eyelashes heart in the air sequence. Wow! One of the only ones I've watched several times.
kimleow:
wow! lipsync started like half of the clip...hmm..well good effort. i like it :)
Mark Stoughton:
This is amazing animation! There is nothing to critique because in my humble eyes it is perfect!
Jeremy Schichtel:
nice idea, great expressions
Chris de Souza:
Well your animation is flawless so I'll critique your story. The beginning exposition is nice but it almost serves no purpose because we never see what happens to those characters. You should have went back to them to see whether the girl liked the drawing or not. I mean if I saw a drawing come to life I'd be pretty impressed, but maybe she's not into that sorta thing. :P
Amazing work!
Eddie Chew:
great job!
kienwei80:
Awesome!! What a great 2d animation!
John:
I love it! great expressions and poses. I love the touch with the eye lashes as well:)
Ann-Marie Denham:
A+! Gorgeous. I'm very envious.
myung lee:
hahaha, awesome poses! but i couldnt tell what she was thinking when she got the drawing.
Mat Thompson:
Great original concept, loads of extra work in there! Nice drawing and really nicely animated...great job!
Joseph Kang:
its great and everything.. but its too long!!!
Trevor Hunter:
this is fantastic! really great work
Jamie:
really cool stuff. Nice idea.
Mark:
Great idea and characters.
Very original
Charlotte Wilcock:
awesome!!!!!
Pete Y:
cute characters
nice set up!
evan:
AWESOME!
Ciaran:
wow. all that in one month? Good work. The only thing I don't like is the sniff/wiping his nose, it's just a bit over the top. It's like he's pointing off screen and then he doesn't, he keeps talking to us. Good stuff though. Lots of stars :)









Animator: Bruno Celegão Monteiro
Description: This is kind of an homenage to all those people that at least once in life has put his talents at service to the heart. So theres this guy and this girl and theres a little fella...
Experience: some^^
Time taken: 30 days