girl
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Lauren Andersson:
nice
Joseph K. Garrahan:
Too many intense poses. Contrast.
Ozgur Yildirim:
You have some nice poses and arcs but overall your animation looks overacting.
Robert Sanchez:
i like this one, I can feel the character through his expressions and movement,
John Erickson:
I like how he slumps down at the end. very nice touch. The lip synch and the intensity of the mouth movement is very good. His left hand in the beginning is a bit locked. Some moving holds on the hands/ fingers would make it better.
Eric Huang:
Your poses need more variation, he sure holds his right hand out for a lot of them.
Aaron Clement:
Not too bad... nothing really jumps out at you, though... maybe a prop would have helped.
Marcos:
Great poses!
Ann-Marie Denham:
I like how the character's right hand leads some of the gestures. The body follows well.
Steve Clarke:
This would have got a higher vote but i wasnt keen on the last part "change for me".A bit over dramatic. The rest is great though and shows a talented animator at the helm:)
Paul Davis:
Really great job! The lip syncing looked dead on and his motions were fluid and well done.
Tom Cho:
Excellent lip-sync. Perhaps he could be more focussed on who he's talking to.
Siva Kumar:
Lip sync is very good !
Stuart Livingston:
Acting is good, better sense of weight than most on here, only problems are just the lighting seems weird, but otherwise not bad not bad
Emmanuel:
More the eyebrows a bit more.
Dan Dulberger:
Very good. Some moves are too quick thought, especially the last one. Lower body maybe abit stiff.
Kyle Rockman:
Overall the motion is great you have nice holds and such but you use the same gesture repatedly...if your going to flail the hands out try to keep it to a max of once maybe twice a scene....try to come up with other gestures then arm flails. keep up the hard work.
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
You keep the same poses for too long, imo. Try mixing it up a little. Also the lipsync is off.
G. Smith:
Good job with the emotion but advice for the environment: change your black shadows to gray and dont use a single light for the scene









Animator: Nanda van Dijk
Description: this is my entry, hope you all enjoy
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Experience: 2 years
Time taken: way to long :P