David Artura:

Great effort! I do think the lip sync could be tightened up a bit at the beginning.

As for the posing, less is more. A clip this short doesn't need a large variety of poses, simple poses with solid transitions.

Andrew Stovesand:

Cool cool.
Seems like a little shoulder pop at "that maybe you know"

Aaron Clement:

I like the arm touch at the end. Felt kinda generic with the actions, though.

Tom Cho:

Good poses but I would watch the lip sync.

selvaraj:

good animation

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

You've got some nice poses, but seems a little forced and also too exaggerated for me. There's also some nice transitions. The lipsync could use dome work but Alfred is not easy in that aspect.

David Bokser:

Pretty polished. The spine might be a bit too stiff, it never seems to bend.

Alexis St-Laurent:

The animation is good, but the acting doesn't feel right. If you play the scene without any sound, he seems to be pleading something and the apologising.... If that is what you were aiming for, it's my turn to apologize :)

Jen:

Good effort, but the action doesn't feel natural to me. It could be personal preference

Christiaan Moleman:

Not sure about the "I thought" pose, leaning on the table. The expression and head tilt don't seem to fit the line. Like the getting up though.

Maybe the arm grab and looking away at the end is a little too shy compared to the rest.