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Final Rating: 4.47. Finished: 62 out of 131 entries.
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Animator: Mathieu Walsh

Description: Tried to get a more realistic/weighty style happening.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 12 hours

Comments:

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Brad Regier:

i like his slightly drunken acting, but his head wheels around too much. Around 198 his face gets lost. Good stuff overall!

HariNarayan:

seems Floating !!

Matt Kenley:

the movement is very broad, maybe take the arms down a notch. Also, some of them are awkward, watch out for all the body parts moving at the same time.

Haakon Gaarder:

nice flowing movement!

Sunny Kharbanda:

Good start, but the poses get a bit repetitive.

Olivier Ladeuix:

Bishop seems to be a bit off balance, check your side viewport

Eric Huang:

The character lacks focus, what/where is he looking at?

Jesse Baumgartner:

Only thing that really bothers me is that the arms are twinning throughout pretty much the whole animation. NIce poses but just breaking up the arms will help a lot.

Andy van Straten:

the poses seem quite repeated. try some other ones apart from hands wide apart to put emphasis on a part of the dialogue

Gregory Marlow:

Some of the movements are a A little too wild

Andrew Stovesand:

His acting is funny, but some of his poses seem unbalanced.

John Erickson:

good job, some nice poses going on.

Aaron Clement:

He felt drunk... was he drunk? Everything flows well, though... the weight felt good.

W Jacob Gardner:

dont show that much of the body if you aren't going to move the lower half
There isn't much motivation for him walking around for those few steps. Make it necessary if you're going to move him

samy.oddjob@gmail.com:

too much twining

andyM:

nice acting at 175.
bit floaty though, and some of the big poses looked too big

Mariya Kalachova:

I think the arm gestures are a bit too large, they look like they're almost making him fall over. But other than that very nice.

Praveen Varghese:

great effort! but take care of smaller details like FINGERS and EYE-CONTACTS!

Steve Clarke:

I voted this as great effort because i like the character put into this but i do feel that the arms are too exaggerated in parts especially the ending. Its very distracting. Tone that down and the vote would have been higher.

Seth Taylor:

Very nice, but seems to be leaning back past the fall line

Emmanuel:

Too exaggerated, try easing it up a bit.

John Cruz:

That was good. There was a lot of really good movement going on. Nice work.

David Bokser:

the character seems detached from the clip. He seems like he's mimicking someone saying the line instead of saying the line. Perhaps some of the poses hit a bit too late and are too exaggerated.

Wolfram Kampffmeyer:

he moves his head too much from side to side.

Victor Wong:

Some twinning happening with the arms at the beginning. Otherwise gestures appear to be well-timed.

Giovanni:

arms movements do not always imply these large torso oscillations... they are distracting

Dan Dulberger:

I think less symmetric moves would've made it better. But not bad.

Mike Courtney:

hips need to compensate for torso leaning back

Lauren Wells:

Motion's pretty smooth, just watch out for twinny gestures

selvaraj:

very goog animation

Rajesh Gupta:

More facial expressions please.

Nanda van Dijk:

i think its a bit over the top. i think it looks a bit strange becouse of that. if you would tweak it down a bit i think you have a great animation left. the rest is realy nice and smooth. keep up the good work

Paulo Clayton:

The way his body swings around is a little dizzying to me, sort of distracting how his upper body swivels around at his waist. Other than that, great expression and acting.