C. J. Cow:

Great animation! I love the jittery hands around frame 75~95.

HariNarayan:

too much movement !!

Daniel Huertas:

nice acting.. it's a shame that we cannot see it completely cuz of the light setup.. what i would change is the last part when he says "for me" cuz in your shot it seems like he would be saying "for me??" ... goor effort

Haakon Gaarder:

Very nice! the only thing missing is some more upper lip movement, and maybe he shouldn't point with his finger, it doesn't fit with what he is saying. Great flow!

Olivier Ladeuix:

great stuff but you might be able to simplify the acting a bit

Eric Huang:

Nice!! I like the subtle gestures ~80. The only thing I don't like is the pointing pose, it's awkward for me.

Gregory Marlow:

I love the last few poses but I think overall he moves a little too much. Look for the golden poses and hold those as long as possible.

Tyler Phillips:

"..get him this girl that he loves" is my favorite part.

Jesse Baumgartner:

I like your poses a lot. When he says "this girl that he loves" I don't like how he gestures away from the camera and almost turns away from it, both of his hands disappear, too.. Maybe if he didn't turn so far back, so you could still see his hand, that would help sell that gesture. Keep it up.

Aaron Clement:

I feel distant to your clip... as though I'm an onlooker and not apart of the scene... Have him looking more toward us. Some of the actions felt cliche... Some nice smooth actions in there...

Marcos:

Great poses, arcs and gestures

Ann-Marie Denham:

Nice end gesture.

Michael Vandenhoven:

Love the acting in this one

W Jacob Gardner:

why is he mostly in profile? Turn him towards camera more.
And cut your number of poses in half.

kienwei80:

Feel a bit shaky for his hands ( help him in some way...)

diganta:

its really cool

samy.oddjob@gmail.com:

nice animation, and some nice idea of acting, just you repeat too much the same movment and there is still too much twining

Jamie Giger:

The animation is great but the camera placement needs work.

Gregory Naud:

Great acting

Eun Ki:

Great animation. My only comment is camera angle... It could be better with front...

David Artura:

Really good job! I would only suggest that you tone it down just a hair. You have some really great posing going on, but then you rush out of it to get another pose in.

Stewart:

some good stuff, but too much stuff. Too many stock gestrues for gesturing sake. Simplify, and you'll have some really strong stuff.

Nate Dorn:

watch the upper spine

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Hey, nice acting. The movements are very fluid and very detailed. The "this girl" and "I thought" seem a little overacted, and the staging on "this girl" doesn't help. Still, nice work.

Mat Thompson:

I really didn't like the camera angle choice of this but I thought some of the posing was nice and some of the smaller 'detail' animation was good too.

David Bokser:

I think staging it more toward camera would give it a bit more punch. The animation looks very polished.

Dan Dulberger:

Great animation. It's exaggerated, but it isn't the wild kind of overdone cartoony effect, it's more like a charming actor overacting. Just great and really fun to look at.

Mike Courtney:

put character in front of contrasting background so people can see the animation better, right hand swinging back in the beginning looks like a pop

Meaghan Arbital:

Great hand movements, except for the "I thought" pointing, that seems a bit forced. Not quite what an actor would choose for that line. I love the "change for me" movements.

Cole Higgins:

"things...go... would gang for me" stinkin beautiful!!!! I love that part.

Almost a little to alpachino though. or to comical at some points. Almost feels like seinfield or something like that. Its really good but at points it feels like the characters is not taking himself seriously.

Paulo Clayton:

Excellent, excellent acting. Get the lip sync smoother and more accurate and you'll nail it!