I thought....
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Kyle Rockman:
Nice job over all on the body movements you definatly have a good sense of movement and such.....but the facial portion was very week....if this is your first dialouge test great job....other wise you'll need to study the mouth a bit more....take some footage of yourself speaking into the camera and rewatch it in slow motion and look the the way the mouth transitions. Keep up the good work.
Brad Regier:
Pretty good acting.
I feel at "things would" his face has been down in that pose too long; maybe bring it up?
Eric:
decent, the scratching of the leg part was nice. Some issues with lipsync.
Joseph K. Garrahan:
the ending is great when he scratcher. The lipsync is a little twitchy.
David Artura:
Really nice work! I would only suggest to simplify the posing a bit. Maybe remove a couple of them. Your transitions are great, you have a nice sense of overlap and timing as well. You just, to me, tried to do too much. Tone it down and it's a really nice shot!
Jen:
I love the posturing and sense of weight, but I feel like his lips could use a little more tightening before I'd declare this piece finished
David Bokser:
the lip sync is a bit too loose and the poses seem unfocused.
John Erickson:
good timing. I like all the things going on with his hands. Nice eye movement.
Aaron Clement:
A tad random at times... I like the rim light, but maybe a little strong... The sad face at the end... worked for me.
Marcos:
Very nice gestures and facial expressions, my only critique is the way he balances the weight from one side to the other, too linear, maybe I'm being picky...
Alonso Soriano:
pick those feet up and reposition them everyonce in a while if he's going to lean back and forth so much
W Jacob Gardner:
dont show that much of the body if you aren't going to move the lower half
jae:
Needs more expressive facials on certain gestures. Hands could be more expressive too.
Tom Cho:
Perhaps could use more zip in certain places.
Noshin:
ooooooooookkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Ozgur Yildirim:
Watch out your weight shifts.
Giovanni:
The hands control is perfect! I love it.
Lips seems to be in need of some more work,
Dan Dulberger:
Can't help but think this would've looked better on another character.
Mike Courtney:
lip sync needs work
Cole Higgins:
great emotion at the end there where hes looking at the floor. I would like to see more wieght in his hips though.
Nanda van Dijk:
two tumbs up for you :D
Christiaan Moleman:
The "if I could" gesturing seems a bit too fast. I really like "that he loves" and "you know... change for me".









Animator: Sander Kamermans
Description: The sound was not very out bursting so I didn’t animate it very explosive. And I tried to find some original poses. I hope you like what I did.
Experience: This is my third Lipsync (second 3d)
Time taken: around de 14 hours