Brad Regier:

I love it: the ol' stretch 'n' yawn routine.

Daryl Marples:

I liked the set up, however, I think the main character stoops too much.

Matt Kenley:

LOL! nice scene setup. Love the yawn move goin on in the background, very good animation overall.

Patrick Alessi:

The idea is good...

chrisbyk:

Really nice concept. My main crit is that your character s left arm seems a bit stiff, not looking very natural.

Eric Huang:

It needs more overlapping motion... it's too pose to posey for me :P. I like your poses though!

John Erickson:

some good poses. could use some tweaking between some poses. at times a bit choppy and jumpy. good overall. a bit more movement on the fingers and hand during some poses. hand seems a bit stiff at times.

Davide Como:

Gestures should be more loose (in particular look at his right arm). Keep also an eye to shilouettes.

Derek:

why is he hunched over the whole time?

selvaraj:

good animation

Aaron Clement:

Good staging. It's all very clear. Things were a little floaty and happened at the same time, though. Maybe if the girl and the guy started fighting in the background would have been more entertaining. But well staging and very clear... good job there.

Wolfram Kampffmeyer:

funny interpretation :-)

Dan Dulberger:

He moves lightning fast at times. It doesn't look nice or appropriate imho.

Derek Mabson:

Funny! Good effort. I would concentrate a little more on the hand poses. The lack of attention to them really stuck out to me. There are only two poses on his right hand.

Jorge Rodiles:

nice way to tell the sotry!