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The Distracted Waitress

by Andrea C

Final Rating: 6.89. Finished 19 out of 330 entries.

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Animator: Andrea C

Description: A distracted waitress gives bad news to a customer eager to eat some muffins.

Rain rig and Vincent rig from Blender Studio:
studio.blender.org

Experience: 10

Time taken: 3

Comments:

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Nathaniel Ales:

This looks amazing, except for the very end where the guy freezes in his final pose. I would've moved him out of the frame in the final shot completely so it didn't look so weird.

Juan Luna:

Loving the animation here! I think the camera animation does well to pull us into the scene and anticipate what will be shown on the plate. However, from frame 258 onward it feels super off that the customer character is just completely frozen with no subtle movements at all. If it's to be played as a joke I would understand, but in this medium a rig staying completely still is really eye-catching and not in a good way.