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Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit

by Kyle

Final Rating: 4.53. Finished 55 out of 130 entries.

24,181 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Kyle

Description: A short snippet from a documentary concerning the importance of personal autonomy.

Experience: College, plus a few freelance jobs

Time taken: ~11.5 hours of animation, ~29 hours overall

Comments:

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Keaton Towns:

Really nice work on that shaky-cam end shot! My biggest critique would be to give some more life to the old man in his eyebrows and mouth shapes. The lips never make an O shape, but that may have been a limitation of the rig. Good job overall!

Spencer Barber:

Nice! The arm gestures of the first guy felt a bit too big/flowy. But the rest felt pretty natural to me. Good job!

Hayden:

Good animation. The first bit was good, but the second part was very interesting and shown in a unique view. Love the camera shake at the very end.