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You want something. WORK HARD!!

by Fabian

Final Rating: 7.45. Finished 7 out of 192 entries.

3,501 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Fabian

Description: This father is pissed off with the atittude of his son.

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: One week

Comments:

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Fabian:

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Ramsey Pierson:

Very refined and polished animation. Your ability to color and create a very fine scene is great.

However I feel like your character's actions are a little rough, and could use improvement. They seem to be trying to hard to match every beat of the dialogue, rather than just experiencing the emotions of what the dialogue is trying to convey. Very good potential.

John Tyson:

The movement and faces are very expressive but seem to not be too synced with the audio at times.

Brian W.:

Nice. Camera work is well done.