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Soldier and Small Man

by Pablo Flota

Final Rating: 3.39. Finished 136 out of 223 entries.

399 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Pablo Flota

Description: the soldier telling the small innocent man, that he won't fail and he's not afraid but the small man disagrees.

Experience: half year

Time taken: 2 - 3 days

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Jaimee Cowart:

something that would really help is if you spent a little more time on the lip-syncing it seems a bit off and the norman rig looks like he is lightweight smoothing out when he stands up would add a lot more flow

Aldric:

It took me a couple of view´s to understand what was going on. I think there are too many cuts, and it´s distracting, specifically between "yea" and "you will be". The animation is not bad but could be better, one thing I noticed was then the gray guy turns at the end he is a little bit too stiff.

William Barry Eggington:

Pupils?