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I'm not afraid !!

by mael

Final Rating: 4.98. Finished 50 out of 223 entries.

541 views including the voting period.

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Animator: mael

Description: A talk between a young man and his mentor about his future

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 4 days

Comments:

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Samidha Kumar:

animation is ok... but try making the clip more interesting by adding a back ground story.

David Barrow:

Really liked the facial expressions of the first guy. Wonder if it would have added something to have the second guy turn a little bit. They both just stay in their positions and never move.

William Barry Eggington:

Holds are too held. Kind of. . . stiff. But not bad.

Michael Kristiansen:

Well done I like it. Some more secondary animation or overshoot would polish it nicely I think. Especially the first guy and his mouth, which seems to snap and stay for too long in the different cylables.