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little soldier and general

by Shiang

Final Rating: 3.89. Finished 100 out of 223 entries.

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Animator: Shiang

Description: The timid little soldier hoped to take part in the war, but the general look down upon him since he got other soldiers who are better than him.

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 3 weeks

Comments:

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Jed B.:

Nice shoulder slump. Very pose to pose... needs some variety in the transitions... more overlap too.

Jaimee Cowart:

could be smoother but good

Nicolás Burmester:

Try to avoid clichés while you plan the acting, ie: to say "you" don't point at other, to say "me" don't point at you.

William Barry Eggington:

Fun poses but the in-between motion seems to be either overly done or almost linear. Still better than most though. Good job.

David Barrow:

Very different character from all the others I've seen. Maybe a little too much twitching or not fast enough to read as trembling, but I like where you're going.

Eddie Higgenbottom:

You rushed into you will be delay some frames get a chance for the characters to notice each other that's my take.