Final Rating: 3.37. Finished 139 out of 223 entries.

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Animator: Juan Casta�eda

Description: An animation by Juan

Experience: 4 months

Time taken: 2 days

Comments:

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Friska Bako:

I understand the story but need to improve the animation.

David Barrow:

Good expression and camera angle on first guy. The second just didn't look like he was about to die until he suddenly did. If he'd started sinking before his last line it might have made all the difference.

William Barry Eggington:

About at the animatic level but I can see where it was going.