Final Rating: 7.67. Finished 2 out of 223 entries.

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Animator: Sebastian Ciubuca

Description: The new guys always wanna be cool at start...

Experience: 6 years

Time taken: 4 weekends, after the kids went to bed

Comments:

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Shawn Lee:

awesome acting choices!

Leandro Martins:

Super Duper work, schlampe!

Zeeshan Karimi:

Loved it! Great work! Only if there were more frames for the smoke to fade... All the best! ^_^

GokulNath Gajapathy:

*Very nice colors
*The pause first character took before he says "iam not afraid" change of thought process is very nicely done .
*i think look-at for both character is missing , other then the last cut .
*i think there is a perspective problem in second camera cut .
*You could have avoided the pointing finger on the line "you will be "
overall really good piece .

Mike Schanbacher:

Awesome work!

Valeriy Lyamin:

This is great! Awesome animation and design.

Nick Kondo:

Really awesome work. Love the tie pull for the last line.

William Barry Eggington:

Beautiful work. Well done.

Nassim Briedj:

Good one congratulation

Lady Musician:

Great animation! Very fluid.

David Barrow:

Really nice. Like the smoke ring during t he pause.

Brad Bradbury:

This is great!!

The hand placement in 282 is odd.
I think it should go more to the left for a cleaner transition through the cut.

The head boss's nose should press in at 303.

Sebastian Ciubuca:

man, I can t believe you are ONE guy...and here is so much quality!!!

Ruth Agada:

This is my favorite! I love the acting.

Amartya Mukherji:

Very nice and stylized animation

J.K. Riki:

Terrific job! Looks super professional. Really dig the simple shape backgrounds, too. They fit perfectly. And nice animation to boot! High marks all around. :)

Jo Anne Tan:

This is so good! Lovely arcs and very good comedic timing. Many gold stars for you!