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Switching to the other side

by Tai Lin

Final Rating: 3.91. Finished 98 out of 223 entries.

417 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Tai Lin

Description: Malcolm is angry at Andy for wanting to join the Empire.

malcolm rig - animschool.com
andy rig - creativecrash.com/users/jdoubles
images - starwars.wikia.com

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: about 3 weeks

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

William Barry Eggington:

Wowa. That's a dark turn.

Frankie Wright:

Some good emotion

Zach Cohen:

There's not much of a story here other than this apparent dad figure likes to punch his kid a lot.
Are you okay man?

Valentious Williams:

Bitch slapping

Jo Anne Tan:

I'm not sure how this rates for 11SecondClub's no-violence policy... But aside from that, nice acting for the first guy after he gets slapped. That's the highlight of your shot and I see a lot of potential for this to get better technical-wise. The second guy is rather stuff most of the time, especially when he's not speaking. Also watch his eyeline and make sure he's looking at the right target all of the time.