Final Rating: 7.51. Finished 3 out of 223 entries.

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Animator: Shehroz Sheikh

Description: Father is protecting his son from the most dangerous insect of the world.

Experience: 2 Years

Time taken: 5 days

Comments:

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abdullah jalil:

GREAT JOB!!!!!!
WELL DONE

Awais Ahmad:

awsum work

Abdul Wahid:

SUPERBBBB!!!
Awesome work boy. So far so good.
Good Luck!

Tariq Munir:

Very nice concept so far and pretty good animation. Loved it.

Jaimee Cowart:

lip-syncing is a bit off i like what you did its really good

Muhammad Qasim:

Nice. Finally. Masterpiece.

Imran Naqvi:

Nice one :)

Fahad Riaz:

nice work

Samantha Schnauder:

Interesting concept, the lip anims are a little tooooo fast/not on par w/ the words. Still, great lighting and models.

Sanaa Sadiq:

KEEP IT UP!

Sajid Ali Mansoori:

Awesome Work .. Good idea..

Nicolás Burmester:

Animation is really good, try to work on your lipsync!

Victoria Barranco:

Really nice small, fluid motions, though I think the lip sync needs a little work.

Kantrell B:

this is amazing! i just feel the beginning lip sync is a little off and if you were to make the mouth clearer for "I'm am not afraid" and hold the mouth open longer for the second a in "afriad" would make this piece perrrfect! and also just come in on the camera closer and faster for the bee, before his line and not tilt the camera till closer to his second line.

ps. love the glasses touch too, when he adjust them before holding the fly swatter !

William Barry Eggington:

BAM! That is tight. Well done.

Ahsan Leo:

fantastic

Shark Bait:

nice

John Fielding:

niice. one of the few to have a concept that makes sense out of the line. and great animation to boot!

I do think you could work on the lip sync for the guy. I don't know if it's just the sync in the upload/player(except that the sync on the fly seems fine), but regardless, it does seem like you pop between some pretty extreme shapes and could stand to 'phrase' the sync a bit more. Framing through it seems like you've added some shapes you don't need and end up doing some weird things. For instance where he's saying "I'm not afraid", the "I'm" looks almost like it's being played in reverse, opening from a small tight mouth shape and popping out wider almost like he's whistling.

Davit Martirosyan:

Nice work, top 5

Amartya Mukherji:

Nice concept. Animation is also nice.

Omer Waseem:

Nice work... Keep it up

Jo Anne Tan:

Nice! The man's head seems to wobble independent of his neck after he finishes speaking though

J.K. Riki:

Nice idea and really great rendering. The lip sync was off a touch, making it feel like the voice of the dad wasn't coming from the actual character, so that bit could use a little more work. Overall nice job.