Oliver Scott:

Nice dailogue and lipsync, but a bit static in the body. Needs a lot more action and exaggeration on the body. Have him lean forward on the main phrases.

Cory Parks:

Neat, he seems very fluid. He stiffens up at the end though and I think you can break up that pose a bit.

E. Ault:

Move your weight around! The bottom half of him is frozen after the step.

Keith Sizemore:

Make sure you never lock your hip in place

Filipe Pedrosa:

Not related to the animation, but please be careful about the audio quality. The sound has some scratching that really bothered me, which is a shame because the animation itself is nice.