Final Rating: 3.19. Finished 180 out of 238 entries.

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Animator: Daniel Gomes

Description: Because as legendary gangster Al Capone once said, "you can get more of what you want with a kind word and a gun than you can with just a kind word"... even if the "gun" is not a gun at all!

Rigs used: Morpheus and Max.

Experience: About three months.

Time taken: Started about three or four weeks ago, but most of the animation was done in the last two weeks.

Comments:

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hamid:

what's going on ?

Piotr Skulimowski:

Camera movement makes no scene.

Filipe Pedrosa:

The camera moves and jumps too much! I would keep it to two cameras at the most, and no movement in them. I like the idea behind it, but it needs more subdued camera movements and more refined animation.

Reginald Crumpler:

This was pretty good. A bit more focus on the 2nd figure would have made it totally pop.

Janzelle:

Story telling is nice, pretty funny to see he doesn't have a gun, but the walking motion of the tan character looks a bit awkward. Lip motion is a bit too big at most times, but overall it's okay.

Brad Bradbury:

Apparntly you made the camera decisions while you were upset.

Jyrki Kanto:

The camera moves are unmotivated, and some of the cuts are really hasty. If you are going for a handheld look, it's better to rotate more and translate less.