Frank Collazo:

needs to comunicate more the dialogue

Aaron Clement:

The twinning was quite bad. Needs to be more snappy. A little floaty throughout. I like the character design and clothing.

Johnny Castuciano:

ok

Anthony Stevens:

I like his hand gestures, but I found the facial expressions hard to understand apart from his mouth area.

Caleb Drewel:

its good, but there seems to be a shortage of any facial expression. i see eyebrows move every now and then, but thats about it

Charles Eubanks:

Awesome character model! I think this is very strong work overall. One way to take it to the next level would be to add some snap to his body movement, to help emphasize the strong words in the dialog -- your character's movement is pretty smooth throughout, which doesn't quite match the strength of the dialog track. But overall, you did a very good job!

Niels Beekes:

Some great subtle movements in here.

Sunny Kharbanda:

Nice.. could use a bit more exaggeration at the ending.

Craig Perez:

nice cloths on the rig...good job on the clip too...

sharad kumar:

good work!...a lil eyebrow up n down with accents wud've made it
great...Good piece of animation!

Louis Ng:

I think some of the poses are too repetitive. . . I really like the choice of character though. :)

Ken Rice:

Nice character and render. But the animation I think is a little uninterestng due to the excessive amount of twinning - you need more varied, dynamic, and asymmetrical poses in there.

Rob:

Not bad. The poses feel a bit mushy as he moves through them. Try for a little faster snap into them and use the recoil to sell the line. The body language for the scream could use something more explosive, the tight arms-at-sides isn't contrasting against the rest of the shot's acting.

Will:

nice model

Taber Dunipace:

A nice bit, but the acting seems unnatural. Study the principals.

Spencer Jones:

I think some of the actions were to extreme like the first and some were not enough like the ending. Some bits felt slow too like around F230. Nice model

Agne:

he is not fat, that really takes off the impression

Dave Blanchette:

Nice acting.

doc:

richard crumb.........

Timothy Doolen:

The first position, with the character's hands down, doesn't read for what's being said. Other than that, all your other choices of posing were very matching. I also think that the lip sync is a little off ("look at me," and "thing" in particular caught my eye).