Tim Lobes:

Way too dramatic, to a point where you aren't syncing the movements properly. Good start but work on more meaningful movements.

Frank Collazo:

to much body motion

Niels Beekes:

The acting is nice, but sometimes a little wobbly. Oh, and I can't seem to tell if the camera is moving or it is the character that's sliding a bit. But maybe it's just an error in my brains :)

Ian John White:

I'm this SHORT, when he says that there seems to be a strange rotation of the left hand, other wise very good.

harish:

hi ur animation need lot of work...ur character is moving all over the place, and always try to keep ur camera in one position don't move around....ur lip syn is decent...

Johnny Castuciano:

eyes jiggle

Charles Eubanks:

I can definitely see that you put a lot of effort into this. Both characters are animated, and the comforting hand on the shoulder is a good idea. However, I think you could really benefit from focusing more on finding some strong key poses before you get into the finer details. There's a lot of detail in your performances, but no strong poses to anchor them. Keep at it, because I can see that you have talent!

Paulo Clayton:

Some of the body movements have potential. Lip sync is pretty far off, needs work.

Jeroen Koffeman:

dynamic camera. Nice finger-movement at the beginning. The whrists should perhaps bend a little at frame 100. Very beautifull

Aaron Clement:

The guy just moves around too much... not much acting going on here... change the background, also... black backgrounds always takes something away... have learned that from experience.

sharad kumar:

why does it gives the appearence that the characters are floating!!?

Deanna Bishop:

The camera movement is really really distracting. Try to pick fewer poses and hold them. Animation is a bit floaty and confusing.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Way too much movement, you do seem to hear the dialogue correctly but you need to reduce the number of poses and make the ones you keep meaningful. Hold the poses also, the animation is very floaty. Also I would stay away from moving the camera.

David Webster:

I can't tell if the camera is moving or if he is floating around in space. Try holding your poses longer.

J Saunders:

stop moving the camera so much

Dave:

the camera makes me feel like im on a roller coaster. I think less on the hands and more time on the mouth shapes would make this a lot better

Taber Dunipace:

Floaty poses and timing make this piece confusing and hard to follow.

Rob:

the camera move is very off putting

Dave T:

Center of Gravity!