Dan:

This has a real smooth feal to it! Great Job!

Aaron Clement:

Having a black background always seemed to take somthing away... I know, I've made the same mistake... just interesting to note... Some good bits in there... just kinda bland really.

Kamal Bhattacharjee:

good acting
Good job dude...........

Cameron Huber:

A few of the poses were a little snappy but generally I thought this worked pretty well :) I loved the gesture when he said "middle aged..." - very nicely done

Gregory Naud:

Overall animation is cool. Watch out for symetrical poses. Almost all of your poses have tweenings."I was adorable" pose is great!

Guilherme Trog:

Try to work more on the fingers, they can be more expressive than you think

Christopher Alarcon:

The lighting was good, it made your character stand out well. The moth movements were on time with the audio clip but next time try building your own model to show originality.

Lineboy

Traci Plagmann:

I'd love to see him moving around the stage a little more and not straight on to camera so much. The pose at 172 has so much more appeal than most of the rest of it. Your gestures and acting are good though.

Jason Fugh:

5 star: lip sync and pacing need work

Paul Naas:

Watch your twins - the open and end are good, but you have lots of twins in the middle

jonathan topf:

Its a bit sticky, some follow through might help, also maybe have him move arround, use the screen space a little more

Harry G:

His feet were pinned to the same place from start to end. The timing was good but the whole thing was a lot from the front profile.

Johnny Castuciano:

NICE

Brad Regier:

Fun shot!
Could use more asymmetry in poses.

Dave:

watch the silhouette

Taber Dunipace:

Pleasing poppy animation but I feel like this is being used as a sort of short cut to polishing your inbetweens. Still, it works very well and is fun to watch.

Just noticed that the feet stick and move only three very specific moments. Tsk tsk.

sharad kumar:

he sounds sad from the begining,so i am not sure that happy expression will fit in when he says 'i was adorable'.

dinesh:

excellent stuff!!! simple yet very appealing... has all the elements of acting, and is funny too...! beautiful lip sync,and clear and effective staging...
end result is superawesome!

Frank G:

I like it but... the gestures on the "short" & "insecure" hook sdidn't mean anything to me. Compared to the ones on "fat", "look at me" and adorable, they're all good.

Ryan Glovka:

Great acting choices overall...especially in beginning, "I was adorable once". Awesome gestures and personality!! A little pose-to-posey in spots, but very nice!!!

Dave Blanchette:

good performance and animation!

Dave T:

poses are decent, but needs to follow through.

M.Bell:

Some nice animation, simple staging. Since now we know you can animate try experimenting with your staging and storytelling and make the most out of the numerous hours it takes to do this stuff.