Self Conscious Bunny

Final Rating: 4.82. Finished: 36 out of 95 entries.
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Animator: Aaron Large

Description: A bunny talks about his problems until he is scared by an outside voice

Experience: recently graduated

Time taken: Worked on it off and on for the whole month

Comments:

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Frank Collazo:

good poses

Tim Kings-Lynne:

nice production and cool setup.

almost makes having a pet wabbit a little scary.

i think the actions are mostly too 'on' each beat and a little cleche but i like the character

more tweaking of the fallover and settle would be nice

Louis Ng:

He has a pose for each of the 'short' 'fat', 'insecure' words. I think it is not really necessary. Pretty good stuff though.

Johnny Castuciano:

ears too much at beginning

Lenka Zuckova:

Love this little bunny. Really good secondary movement . You could do with stronger poses though. Good lipsync, it's a bit out of sync between insecure and middleaged

Caleb Drewel:

needs more emotion, more exagerated movement, but the animation was smooth and i dig the bunny

Dan Dulberger:

Thought the insecure pose was superfluous and found the motion of the ears unnatural and distracting. The rest was fine.

jonathan topf:

Liked the character and the 'fat' gesture was fun but 'insecure' was a but to much, les is more

Aaron Clement:

Good... it felt natural... but overall, just too symmetrical. Break it up a little... good ending.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

You have nice sync with the dialogue but your poses are too weak and cliché. Move the line of action and create contrast.

David Trudel:

I like the character! nice and smooth animation.

Chris de Souza:

I like this one. Very good facial expressions.

I think the "insecure" pose doesn't work though. It feels too staged. Like he is pantomiming his insecurity rather than feeling it.

Ken Rice:

Nice bunny character and staging. The animation I think is let down though by an excessive amount of twinning - you need more varied, dynamic, and asymmetrical poses.

Rob:

Not bad... the body seems to stay too still, hitting the same bounce over and over. Also, I don't think the twist to mirror "insecure" is necessary... the pose itself is a bit too cliche for me and it takes away from the frustrated energy the rest of the acting delivers. It would be nice to feel the build-up to "THING!" throughout the rant, right now everything feels like it's being hit with the same intensity which makes the scene feel repetitive.

Spencer Jones:

Liked the majority of this one. Especially the `look at me` and`Thing` bits. Not sure why he had to fall back onto his bottom on the end scream though. Or why on insecure he reached for his tail. Maybe was a (phallic joke) but wasnt all that clear not sure there was enough time to pull that off well anyway. Model/Lighting/Setup and all that jazz was good too.