Self Conscious Bunny
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Frank Collazo:
good poses
Tim Kings-Lynne:
nice production and cool setup.
almost makes having a pet wabbit a little scary.
i think the actions are mostly too 'on' each beat and a little cleche but i like the character
more tweaking of the fallover and settle would be nice
Louis Ng:
He has a pose for each of the 'short' 'fat', 'insecure' words. I think it is not really necessary. Pretty good stuff though.
Johnny Castuciano:
ears too much at beginning
Lenka Zuckova:
Love this little bunny. Really good secondary movement . You could do with stronger poses though. Good lipsync, it's a bit out of sync between insecure and middleaged
Caleb Drewel:
needs more emotion, more exagerated movement, but the animation was smooth and i dig the bunny
Dan Dulberger:
Thought the insecure pose was superfluous and found the motion of the ears unnatural and distracting. The rest was fine.
jonathan topf:
Liked the character and the 'fat' gesture was fun but 'insecure' was a but to much, les is more
Aaron Clement:
Good... it felt natural... but overall, just too symmetrical. Break it up a little... good ending.
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
You have nice sync with the dialogue but your poses are too weak and cliché. Move the line of action and create contrast.
David Trudel:
I like the character! nice and smooth animation.
Chris de Souza:
I like this one. Very good facial expressions.
I think the "insecure" pose doesn't work though. It feels too staged. Like he is pantomiming his insecurity rather than feeling it.
Ken Rice:
Nice bunny character and staging. The animation I think is let down though by an excessive amount of twinning - you need more varied, dynamic, and asymmetrical poses.
Rob:
Not bad... the body seems to stay too still, hitting the same bounce over and over. Also, I don't think the twist to mirror "insecure" is necessary... the pose itself is a bit too cliche for me and it takes away from the frustrated energy the rest of the acting delivers. It would be nice to feel the build-up to "THING!" throughout the rant, right now everything feels like it's being hit with the same intensity which makes the scene feel repetitive.
Spencer Jones:
Liked the majority of this one. Especially the `look at me` and`Thing` bits. Not sure why he had to fall back onto his bottom on the end scream though. Or why on insecure he reached for his tail. Maybe was a (phallic joke) but wasnt all that clear not sure there was enough time to pull that off well anyway. Model/Lighting/Setup and all that jazz was good too.









Animator: Aaron Large
Description: A bunny talks about his problems until he is scared by an outside voice
Experience: recently graduated
Time taken: Worked on it off and on for the whole month