Ian John White:

Like the bottle, fluid animation style on that, shame you didnt finish the lip sync.

Marcos Borba Moreira:

is the mouth in the stepped mode yet? :P

Tamara van Zal:

Interesting idea. The limb movements seem a bit stiff and the facial expressions are jumpy. Need to work on having the aninmation flow nicely. Well done with moving his hands across the face after the scream.

Johnny Castuciano:

smooth it out a bit

jonathan fontaine:

is this a rubber bottle ???

Traci Plagmann:

The body movement and gestures look pretty good. The mouth looks pretty staccato though. If you can get the transitions between the mouth shapes smoother the lipsync would read a lot better.

Chris de Souza:

It looks like you kept your mouth/lip sync keys in stepped mode...

Jeroen Koffeman:

319-327 The caracter moves up in the same curve as the bottle does, this is very stylisch!

Niels Beekes:

Nice! But take another look at his eyebrows.

Émylie:

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOyiiiiah baby!

jonathan topf:

I would have liked to see the lip synch finished, it was looking quite good, also he trails out of the final pose when i think it should be held for more impact

Aaron Clement:

Not too bad... watch the lip sync, though... it was very poppy... as if it was left in stepped mode. There was some strange eye direction in there too... good effort.

Rob:

Feels spliney and mushy throughout. Not sure if you meant to leave the mouth in stepped but it's distracting when the body's in splines. Try hitting and drifting through clear poses rather than moving the head and body around so much. The bottle gag is a great idea but the staging and movement in the blue guy makes it hard to read what's happening..at first I thought the bottle was bouncing from the impact of the blue guy on the table.

Dave:

the lip sync is off by a couple frames. Good acting overall

Taber Dunipace:

Mouth is still in stepped and the motions aren't, which is distracting. I love the bottle, good job. Timing seems pretty decent too. Study the principals.

sharad kumar:

lip sync is snapping!..keep working,all the best!

Frank G:

Good facial expressions

David Trudel:

Hey its mine! I give me a 7 stars :-P

Spencer Jones:

From F353 on was great. the animation was generally very good. maybe you could have played/exaggerated him a bit more drunk. maybe found other ways than just rocking him a lil bit. like maybe tried having his hand slipping off the desk or bottle if it fitted somewhere along the timeline or something The lip sync let it down, was way to linear/clicky/roboty