Teddy's Invention
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Luc Degardin:
Good things here. Not sure the blue guy is needed here. You could have use the time spent on him to polish the main Character. lipsynch seems off sometimes. Otherwise, good acting on that guy!
Niels Beekes:
The scientist distracted me a bit, then again, no wonder, he's much bigger. Although, I would move him a little less, he takes up half of the composition.
Ian John White:
nice, like the blue character falling off the bed
Johnny Castuciano:
Awesome! nice 3 characters!
Ritwik Nag:
nice one dude!!love the interpretation.
Kamal Bhattacharjee:
verrrrrrrrrrry nice concept....
Good job dude...........
jinu:
really good idea
M K Sunderam:
Great Acting,But I felt Sceintist was distracting the Action.
Ben Hammersley:
interesting concept. I really like how the blue guy is reacting.
Daniel MC Alvite:
crazy sttuff, nice idea. it just a bit heavy for my eyes, the background make it very distracting. your staging could improve if the blue guy wasnt in the front of the doctors hand.
Jeroen Koffeman:
Nice, original composition. However such a complex composition doesn't make the story easier to tell. The big professor draws all of the attention, in stead of the fat caracter. This really is a shame because the animation is very nice. However this is an animation contest so the animation is really great.
Chris de Souza:
Your animation is really nice on this but the staging is very distracting.
Michael Cawood:
Very well animated, and I'm impressed you got three characters done, but it's a shame that your eye is drawn around the screen too much. The Giant just seems to distracting from the main performance.
Charles Eubanks:
I think your animation is quite good, and the story idea is clever. Better staging could have showcased your main character more effectively -- as it is, he's being upstaged by the background character. Overall, really good job!
Jason Fugh:
5 stars: good timing
Sunny Kharbanda:
Nice subtle reactions from the big guy, and I like the weight when the speaker plops down on the table. The one thing that could be better is the staging of the blue guy's jump. But it's an engaging piece, and I enjoyed watching it!
Nathan Ebbing:
Theres a lot happening to the point I wasn't sure where to initially focus. And despite Sergio having good animation I spent most of my time staring at the large background character. On continuous play backs each individual does look good though.
Dan Dulberger:
Really hard to know who to watch. At the start you should've slowly blurred away the background with the scientist so he didn't steal the attantion from the fat guy. All animation was good.
Aaron Clement:
Great interpretation, but I fell there's too much happening. Staging wise, I didn't know where to look. You totally confused me at the end. I think just two characters would have been enough... Some nice clean animation at the end of the day.
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
You've got too much going on, there's a real staging issue. The main character takes about 1/4th of the screen space and the other characters move widely taking away the attention. Also turning his back to the camera doesn't add to the performance. Animating correctly three characters is tough you could've dropped the blue one.
danyeal:
cool idea! but too much action going on
miles southan:
Great job. Strange idea. I would just tone down the doctor's motion until the end though. It's pretty distracting.
Taber Dunipace:
Ends too abruptly. Fairly good animation but I'm confused as to where to look. Too much going on at once and the busy background doesn't help.
Study the principals.
Thomas Giles:
lol! great idea! and the framed photo was a great touch!
Regis Le Roy:
something else, 3 characters, good idea.
Dave Blanchette:
A lot going on.
MarioReitbauer:
Really good poses, nice acting. I like it ! Only critique is the Pose at Frame 44. Imho he could hold it a bit longer.









Animator: V_I_C_K_Y
Description: Diz time could not mannage much time, just able to complete this much...
Experience: 1 Year 4 Months
Time taken: 25 Hrs.