I was adorable

Final Rating: 5.44. Finished: 22 out of 95 entries.
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Animator: Fernando Falero

Description: I tried to make insecure poses and use a lot of little staggers for to show the nervous personality.

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Experience: two years

Time taken: five days

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dan alvarez:

Nice animation! Something about this was a little off... I think it's the eyes. Your character hits these strong poses, but with each one.. looks to "someone else".
Because of this I don't get as strong an emotional attachment as I should.. especially for such an audio clip.

Dan:

Really like the eye twitch. :)

Neil Polenske:

The work for the eyes and face in general is what got me. Very impressive.

Johnny Castuciano:

nice job

Ritwik Nag:

I think u could do more on the facials and lip sync which seems to be a bit off at places.Great job man....

beck veitch:

Some nice animation here - but too literal and too on the beat

andrea:

your clip didn't load. Sorry, no comments!

Daniel MC Alvite:

great browns and face, nice shaking on short. very funny reaction in the end.

Chris de Souza:

Some really nice poses at the end of this!

Michael Cawood:

A well animated piece with tight poses and timing, although I'd have dropped his shoulders ocassionally as they start high and so you miss the emphasis you'd get from raising them.

David Trudel:

Simple but effective!
Good work on animation. Lipsync is a little bit unreadable to me at some points. The eye twitching on frames 160-168 its funny!

Jason Fugh:

5 stars: lip sink needs a little work

jonathan topf:

Im not getting 'thing', maybe leave his mouth open and use the body to gesture

Dan Dulberger:

Animation looks nice. I think the lipsynch is slightly off though.

Aaron Clement:

I like the eye flicker... nice style of animating... maybe needs more breaking up... but definitely one of the better ones!

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Not too bad, but you need to push your poses more and get the performance right. Also work on the lipsync.

David Webster:

It would have been nice to see a larger chance in his poses, especially when he says fat. He reads like he is saying insecure throughout the animation.

Rob:

Nice, but the gestures feel a bit nebulous. The voice is carrying a high level of stress and frustration I'm not getting from the body language. I like the ey twitch, tho, adds some nice flavour to the shot, and the turn and scream is well done. Try for a little more energy through the dialogue .

Taber Dunipace:

He loses all momentum at "thing." The acting choices are a bit on the bland side and could use more specific personality.

Spencer Jones:

Technically well done and started fine. I think the finger in mouth was kinda weird and the twitching eye later was cool but didn't need to be there. The character seemed to go through too many emotions I thought. F144 angry F157 needy F175 looked sorry F193 frightened F206 scared F215 & 231confused as was I. There was just too much stuff there which I didnt hear from the audio.. I thought anyway, could be wrong though. Looked and was made very well.

Ralph Pacheco:

From "look at me" it's fantastic. Nice poses, very nicely done animation. Before that, it's good, but somehow the actions don't quite go with the dialogue. I think the part where his hand go to his face is where the problem starts.

Stephan Hempel:

I like the eye and brow movement as well as the eye blinks are well timed. But I find the hand gestures on 62 and 159 not quite adequate. Besides an overall broader performance would in my eyes better match the audio. But I find the facials very very good.

Amy:

I like the eye-twitch and the acting in general, but part of the time you were over-acting, even illustrating at one point ("short").

Timothy Doolen:

This is the best one I've seen, if the lip sync wasn't so far off this would be a nine out of ten. Also, the body acting for "fat" didn't read for me, maybe it's just a preference thing. Very nicely done.