thing
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John Vassallo:
Needs a little more attention to posing. Seems a little clunky in some spots, check arcs. Decent acting choices though.
Marcos Borba Moreira:
some pops here and there, lip sync could be better!!! good job though! :)
Aaron Clement:
I like the ending. Feels a bit drifty at times... maybe more moving holds...
Charles Eubanks:
Cute character! He really is a "thing," literally. :) I do like some of the arm gestures, like the cradling to indicate "adorable" (frame 17). There are some good brow indicators for anger and surprise, but I don't see sorrow. Perhaps the eyes are too small to catch some of the nuances of the performance? Also, some stronger movement would have made the shouted words read more clearly. Finally, watch the character's center of gravity -- he's quite off-balance around frame 239. Overall, good job!
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
Way too floaty animation, the lipsync is non existant. You need to make your poses meaningful and performance rich. You need to work on all principles.
Tal Hersko:
moves too much without a reason. should go more from pose to pose with more definitive poses.
Christopher Alarcon:
The quality of the vid was good which makes the animation believable. The lip sync was decent. You could of added an environment to make the animation interesting to where he's situated at.
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Jason Fugh:
5 stars: timing and acting needs work
sharad kumar:
make clear good poses and then give good timing for that...u can get a good action!
Rob:
Timing and spacing is a bit mushy... it feels even and floaty. Generally good poses, tho I'm not thinking the pose for "adorable" is reading yet. Arcs feel a little wobbly too. Not bad, but still needs some work
Johnny Castuciano:
need to punch it a bit more
Niels Beekes:
That eyetwich gave you an extra star, even though it might came a bit too late in my opinion. The animation needs to be looked at again I think. I feel like you're missing great opportunities in the sound!
Taber Dunipace:
Floaty CGI timing and inbetweens. Study the principals.
Frank G:
Nice lower eyelid tremble.
Jeroen Koffeman:
Because of the movement of all the muscles is very smooth, no certain stiffening ore loosening, the movement becomes a bit like that of a little baby. (Looks like the animatronic movement from the babyraptor in Jurassic park) This goes well with your fetus-like model, and it increases the credibility of te overall character.
Renn:
Folding of the skin is theoretically good I think, but the illusion doesn't quite make it.
Extra stars for the twitching eye!









Animator: Erik Eidukas
Description: I decided to give my new rig a try, it was a really fun experience. Thanks to everyone for the feedback
Experience: student
Time taken: 25-30hours