Poor Toy...

Final Rating: 6.17. Finished: 8 out of 95 entries.
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Animator: Guillaume Roux

Description: The monkey had stole the toy's wear

Experience: almost 2 years

Time taken: nights and weekends

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Allier Zelaya:

Good animation.

Luc Degardin:

really nice poses! and a good idea too. Love the gestures on "look at me"! Nice job

Brent Steinberg:

looks really good. the arms may be a little too offset between frames 70-84. you've got some great facial animation going on, and your posing is really strong. and maybe i'd like to see a bigger contrast in the antic and when he sits down. but great job

Mariya Kalachova:

Great animation! really good weight and physical feeling to the poses, love the shaking of the fingers!

Frank Collazo:

at frame 280 the fingers could move a little bit to have hold frame

Niels Beekes:

hihi, I love how the monkey doesn't care!

Nick Adducci:

Oh man wow! I love this!

That is some excellent character right there. not only are the gestures and expressions convincing in their intent but they move in feeling to the tempo of the dialogue. The only couple things I could say can be added is Render this! And maybe make the monkey guy look a little more finished. That's about it.

Tim Kings-Lynne:

i really like the idea and setup, especially when you acatually SEE the monkey!

the lip sync and shapes are expressive and feel nice. good rhythm and S+S in the face.

good/interesting take and settle off screen at the end

nice cartoon poses, i think it fun.



kEViN:

that was funny.

Louis Ng:

Ha ha, cute monkey. Good job with it.

Johnny Castuciano:

awesome

Gregory Naud:

Great Job! As I already told you i would just have offset the moves on the "look at me part", cause it's too much in sync with the dialogue. Other than that, great acting as usual;)

scpl:

Really good posing!!!
The idea is original than others.
AWESOME!! GREAT!

benj:

yeah! good rythm and really great posing! good job ;)

maybe a little problem with ham's brows mais rien de grave :-)

Caleb Drewel:

good idea, needs more animation

Paul Naas:

Great scenario - excellent animation

Charles Eubanks:

The animation here is really solid! Great extreme poses to match the dialog, and very polished throughout. I didn't quite get the story though -- did the monkey make him short by stealing his hat? At any rate, this is a really solid entry!

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Good job! Nice posing, staging, originality and moves. I love the monkey stance and look at the end. Congratulations!

Aaron Clement:

I like the ending... that was great. not too bad overall.

sharad kumar:

i liked the falling a lot! nice work...

miles southan:

Awesome work. Check your arcs and spacing though. For instance, look at the screen right hand between 183 and 196 or so. Also, I was really distracted by all those high contrast shapes in the background. I kept trying to figure out what that box was rather than watch the performance. I would just take out the dark gray indented cowboy plastic thing.

Leandro Inocencio:

good timing, good idea.

Rob:

Very nice!!!

Great weight, and I like the progession of intensity in the poses as the first guy works himself up ...

I'm not sure if the gag is supposed to be the reveal of the monkey, but if not, perhaps framing him in the shot a little further away from the camera so we can tell what we're looking at in the first shot would help it read...

Excellent work!!

andrew s:

Poses are good, and some nice timing, just need to polish some more

Andrew Stovesand:

monkeys are always funny

dinesh:

nice!! ^_^

Spencer Jones:

Really liked this one

Andrion Becker:

moom looks pretty good, monkey needs love. I think the staging could be improved as well

Kamal Bhattacharjee:

really good acting & animation...
but there is some pose not hitting the accent... plz chk

Renn:

Fantastic animation all over.

Extra star for the secondary motion hat twiddling!