Tangerine

Final Rating: 5.43. Finished: 22 out of 95 entries.
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Animator: John Vassallo

Description: Tangerine,a washed up male cabaret dancer confronts his biggest vice.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Joey Shabadoo:

Sync in the mirror if off. Arms appear to be broken or dislocated near the end. Otherwise, I like it!

Allier Zelaya:

I love the mirrored animation. Good concept. One thing to mention is his right arm pose at frame 280 seems a little unnatural.

Mariya Kalachova:

AWESOME!!!!

Kamal Bhattacharjee:

Good job dude...........

andrea:

I love it. The character you thought up just fits perfectly. The last pose is so touching and funny at the same time... its the best anim I've seen so far. Please polish the poses and finish the rough! Its worth it.

David Trudel:

frame 278: looks like his right arm is broken!

Sunny Kharbanda:

Some great stuff in there.. but what breaks it is the fact that he stands too still in front of the mirror in the first half. Although you've mirrored the poses exactly, the lines on the reflection are alive and moving while the lines on the guy are still. Some subtle motion there, even during the "still" parts, would have completed the illusion.

Aaron Clement:

Not too bad... the cushion guy needed a blink or something to keep him alive when he was talking to him. Good exaggeration... good ending, too.

Dan Dulberger:

Sometimes it looks like he twists hes arms too far.

sharad kumar:

good work!..but i am not sure whether 'thing' pose is okay....u need to get the D mouth register when he says 'Fat'.

miles southan:

Awesome work! The only thing that really bugs me is that his right arm (screen left) looks broken around frame 282. Also his breathing cycle there is weird. He'd probably just keep his mouth open. It's also very even and mechanical feeling (no overlap) and too much motion and/or too fast overall.

Rob:

Nice...I like the use of the mirror.

Be careful about the right arm between 275 and 340... right now if feels a bit broken from the angle... Find an angle that complement's the silhouette of the left arm and I'd say you're golden.

Beat Bachmann:

10 x the same animation?
huh, what's wrong?

Johnny Castuciano:

neat

andrew s:

Nice design. the second last pose it looks like his right arm is broken, but still I like this piece.

Taber Dunipace:

Nice, but a bit confusing. The posing is awkward at times and I think they could have been more interesting over all. Nicely done. Keep studying the principals.

Spencer Jones:

Wicked

Andrew Linke:

love the concept.

Dan Harriman:

Good! Although I think the man's body language is a bit too reserved. The voice track emotions are running high and yet the character doesn't reach those heights.

Michel Dani:

I love the style of drawing, but the animation didn't get there