Oren Bentov:

great idea :)

Taurice:

i enjoyed the pause on the blue character after "thing." I think the blue character during the screaming could have been pushed more.

Ian John White:

Nice enough, bit boring

Marcos Borba Moreira:

some simetrical pose u have there. would be good to brake that!!! other then that, good job!

Charles Eubanks:

Good performance and effort! The character strikes the big poses at the right times to emphasize the dialog. Also, good job keeping the second character's performance appealing, yet not distracting! I do feel like the scream at the end could have been bigger. And watch out for "twinning" (symmetrical poses). Adding some asymmetry to those key poses can strengthen the appeal. Overall, good job!

Kamal Bhattacharjee:

Good job dude...........
no sence to fall down

jonathan topf:

the photographer was more interesting, less extreme

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

You need to push your poses more and get the performance right. He's barely moving his stance, doesn't communicate too much or make it interesting.

Aaron Clement:

I like it how the pink guy is playing with eh camera... that's good acting... Ed Hooks would be proud of it... doing an action until something happens for him to do a different action... great stuff!

Johnny Castuciano:

nice

andrew s:

neat, but you needed to vary the poses a bit, just too forward facing all the time and too up and down in his movements..His pose when he screams doesn't feel like it goes far enough.. . I'm being picky, it is nice work..

Pam:

Nice faint!

Taber Dunipace:

Watch out for twinning and floaty timing. Keep studying the principals.

Spencer Jones:

All really going nice. Think he held that `fat!` pose too long and was kinda a funny lookin pose anyway. Good overall

Zee Myers:

nice! the photo fling and the "fat" are great...his sway before the fall seems too fast...