xtreme agony

Final Rating: 4.85. Finished: 36 out of 95 entries.
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Animator: sharad kumar

Description: sergie is pouring his heart out ..but andy seems to be the wrong guy for that !!!

Experience: 4yrs in 2d & 1yr in 3d

Time taken: 20hrs approx. over the last 2 weeks.

Comments:

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Luc Degardin:

2nd shot: the tall guy should be on the left, main character on the right. Good poses in the beggining.

Frank Collazo:

dont like the camera change at the end

Niels Beekes:

Pretty nice acting, especially the "look at me part". Too bad the camera wasn't on his face when he screamed, you could have done some nice expressions there!

Tim Kings-Lynne:

camera move is distracting, and 'crosses the line'

a lot of the sync is generally late and a little too much time is spent on the inbtwns rather than the accents


Johnny Castuciano:

Awesome

Cameron Huber:

The animation is pretty sweet. The only thing that threw me off was that camera change. Shooting the camera to behind the main character can confuse an audience. Instead I would try cutting to the left side of him, so in a way it just mirrors the shot we already have. Nice work!

Chris de Souza:

The beginning of this is great. Some very nice subtle gestures in there with solid timing.

Watch your editing/shot selection though. You broke the "line of axis" between the two characters when you transitioned to the new camera angle.

Charles Eubanks:

Good job! The lip sync is pretty accurate, and staging works well. I thought the eyebrow movement was a little erratic at the beginning, and didn't quite convey the emotion as well as it could have. Also, your main character was a little too motionless when the second character delivered his line. But overall, good job!

Ken Rice:

I think you spoil your ending by changing camera position - your lip sync could be tightened up a bit too.

John Vassallo:

Camera crosses the 180 degree line, so the second cut is jarring, decent work on the animtion though. Lip sync needs a little work.

Sunny Kharbanda:

Good poses on the main guy, but watch for your screen continuity. That cut is very jarring since he's suddenly switched to the opposite side of the frame

Aaron Clement:

Something really weird going on with the compression at the beginning. You cut across the line with the camera and broke the 180 degree rule.

Wesley Schneider:

good, but time is a litle slow

Rob:

Very nice

Dave:

good acting. The mouth shapes could be worked on some more and that camera cut was jarring. You broke the 180* rule. This last shot should be flipped with the boy on the left side of the screen and the fat one on the right side of the screen.

Taber Dunipace:

That person is about 10ft tall compared to him. Without an obvious explanation as to why, this is distracting.

Too many actions too. Each emphasized word does not need a separate specific pose assigned too it. The acting in the scene should PROGRESS logically and feel like one though process.

Gregory Naud:

Good animation overall. Watch out on the cut. Camera should stay on the same side of the imaginary line between two characters..otherwise the viewer gets kinda lost.

Pete Shand:

Nice animation, just looks like he's holding back a bit.

Regis Le Roy:

like it, only strange change in camera, left is right and right is left. i would stay on the same side of the axis.