dan alvarez:

Very nice animation. Nice touch with the picture in the background!

Luc Degardin:

Good job. Hands are a bit over animated to me. In general, you could have calm down few moments to really use others

Renaud Déchaux:

Animation is fine but

Frank Collazo:

like it a lot

Tim Kings-Lynne:

some tighter eye direction/acting would be nice

some really nice actions

watch repeating the same reactions and twinning and the 'W' pose

Ryan Hagen:

Great work, I think it should win. Good luck.

Aaron Clement:

Nice render... I don't know why he talks to himself off screan for so long... maybe if he looked over at the other guy part way through.

J Saunders:

i like the guy fliping channels... but i prefer to watch him more then the other guy

Nick Adducci:

Most excellent! Finally someone pushes this model to the level of expression that makes good animation great.

One thing I think you could've pushed further was the inhales of the character before his lines. They're very expressive too. And I think the first line of "I was adorable once" is a place where the inhale before it was a little unfelt from the animation.

But overall this is one of the best I've seen and the expressions for "middle aged thing" were spot on. Well done!

Brent Steinberg:

some really nice timing. bery snappy which is great. but there could probably use some more subtle poses to contrast the bigger ones. really good though.

Cameron Huber:

Very nicely done! When he said "look at me!" I felt the movement was a bit too much, considering all the others were held back nicely without going too over the top. All in all a sweet attempt!

David Alvarez:

Sometime seems like the main character was speaking with a third person in the room. I think the animation would work a lot of better if he will focus in the second character in some parts of the speech.

Daniel MC Alvite:

nice finger movs, very smooth, I lie your poses, I just feel a bit weird the steps, kind of missing weight. but very nice job.

Christopher Alarcon:

The animation is excellent but I bon't think that voice suits the main character because he looks more older. The lighting is really good and the enviroment aswell. The lip sync was on time and it was very good.

Keep up the good work mate.

Lineboy

Jeroen Koffeman:

The great contrast between the exaggerated movement of the standing caracter and the bored movement of the sitting caracter really tells the story. Just great

Michael Cawood:

A very good performance from both characters.

Mike Courtney:

aside from his line, the sitting man doesn't seem to be engaged in the scene at all. Is he ignoring the general? Engrossed in the TV? Think about what the characters are doing and why.

David Trudel:

Nice animation and I like the way you act the scene. But not clear enough to me. Does he talk to the wall?

Diego Oriani:

Love the timing and the snaps.

Rami Daoud:

that's good..but i think the lipsync is off a bit...

Matthew Brophy:

it would be great if you had the the 2nd character on the sofa react more to the main character

Brian Nicolucci:

Some really fun poses in there, though I think you could probably do without one or two as he is hitting them all right now.

vinay:

nice moving holds. well animated

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Nice job!!! Congratulations, the animation is nice and thigh, expressive and building energy. Great scream. IMHO you could change the staging to give the main character a little more room and have him face the camera for even better performance. Still, very nice job, one of the best. Congratulations! :D

miles southan:

Nice work!! Here are my nitpicks. The way he gets into that last pose is really uniform. It would be nice if the hips led and the torso, neck and head overlapped up. You're starting to do that now but I think you could drag the overlap out for like 5 more frames (maybe start the motion sooner). Also, he's almost totally in profile at a couple places in the animation which is generally frowned upon. It's usually best if you can see both eyes.

Rob:

Really nice. My only real criticism is that the acting is the same thing a few to many times...that snappy head wobble...Lose one or two to use as an antic into "middle aged thing" might break it up so it's not looking like the same move over and over

Johnny Castuciano:

i like this one

Vi Van:

I enjoyed that. :)

andrew s:

nice

Taber Dunipace:

All of his actions are the same speed, FAST. Slow some of them down to add emphasis to the fast ones. Keep studying the principals.

sharad kumar:

i think he could have connected with the guy on sofa if he had been looking at him after he says 'thing'....nice piece though!keep it up!

Spencer Jones:

Rocked. Guy in chair is awsome

Dave Blanchette:

very good acting and animation polish

Michel Dani:

the characters are great, the setting is too distracting, and the acting is weak, but the animation is good.

Renn:

Haha, that was absolutely flawlessly done! I thought for a second that some of the animation was a bit too sharp and quick, but the picture of them both on the wall outweighs that small gripe by a mile!

Extra star for the flinch!

Jeranimo:

Beautiful!